Comments: 12
VampiricAcid [2007-11-21 11:06:38 +0000 UTC]
Wow amazing.
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sesshomaru-blood [2006-11-28 05:28:28 +0000 UTC]
OH FUCK!!!!!!!!! IM SO HORNY!!!!!!!!!!! SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU MAKE ME FEEL LIKE A SLUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ccris3 [2006-09-18 00:43:16 +0000 UTC]
Please write more!!!!!!! Write a no 2,3,4 and 5!!!!!!!
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sexykitty2385 In reply to JoBz [2006-05-12 02:54:47 +0000 UTC]
well actuall if you go through my gallery there are a few other peoms and short stories that i have written take a look and let me know what you think thnsk for the comment im off to read yours now
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eclipsesokaiba [2006-05-09 21:40:51 +0000 UTC]
ugh sorry about that all the same comments the stupid machine acted up *kicks crappy school computer* me really sorry!
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eclipsesokaiba [2006-05-09 21:39:55 +0000 UTC]
Hidden by Owner
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eclipsesokaiba In reply to sexykitty2385 [2006-05-10 01:31:24 +0000 UTC]
yeah that's awesome i'm actually both really and i think it shows well ty for reading my story.
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eclipsesokaiba [2006-05-09 21:39:52 +0000 UTC]
*jaw drop* whoa that was deep and torturous indeed and yet oh how the man enjoyed it but I also liked how you made the girl still rebelious. I also like the fact that the slave master is a woman you don't see much of that and I like how you went into detaili here also detailing the master's obssesion with having a light blue eyed and a dark blue eyed slave it was a nice add to the story. and I'm really happy for you introducing a whip into the story for it is my favorite toy as well for torture and for pleasure. the words you used for explicted and graphic which makes the story even more enjoyable. All and all I'm greatly looking forward to your next peice
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