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Published: 2016-12-04 13:26:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1388; Favourites: 51; Downloads: 25
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Your gallery is gorgeous! Like honestly it was so hard to pick a picture to critique, they're all stunning! Your shading reminds me of Artgerm, in a really good way 
One thing I do notice is the shading around the chest. While I know what you're going for, the shadow directly beneath the breasts kind of looks like a huge scoop out of her chest. I think it would have worked a bit better if the shadow were lighter, and maybe didn't have such a hard edge? Skin often doesn't have a lot of sharp edges so it can be difficult to use them and not make it look kind of like clay. There's also something a little strange about the anatomy of her right arm, I think. I think it's the part where it connects to her body? To my eyes it looks kind of as if it bulges strangely, or maybe continues down too far? Yeah I think that last one is it, it looks slightly too thick, going down all the way to the shell like that. One last thing is that I've noticed the white of her eyes seem totally white, and I think it would look better if it had some kind of pale shadow below the top eyelid. Maybe it could be good to also have some bigger shadows on her hair? You have some but I think there would still be some towards the front of her face as well.
Sorry I didn't have much to offer, hope some of this helps XD
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First off all, thank you for even taking your time! Nowadays it's really rare (on DA more than elsewhere) that anyone takes their time to write some words, mostly people just like or repost... but hey, thanks again, your critique really made my day a bit better and even helped me see some stuff in the picture I haven't seen before. Like the skin issue or wtf should I do with the background... (I try to imitate a 35mm Objective by adding a bokeh and blurry background because I'm too lazy to build up a real 3D scenery). But looking at this, I should really start with 3D sceneries more
To be honest, I'm often thinking about my art and most of the time I can't see the purpose of what I'm doing and then I scrap ideas and sketches because there is no motivation left. And lets be real... to this day my art had no purpose rather then killing time and trying to get some upvotes. But as time passes, you get that sense of "no one cares about you so why should you care about being famous" and you start to see that art really shouldn't be self-marketing but rather individual fullfillment. And hey, it really helped! After I stopped trying to hunt a ghost named "daily deviation" I started to get better because I stopped giving a fuck about art
kk... enough philosophical nonsense, thanks for the nice comment, I'll try to review some of your pictures when I catch some time ^^
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You're so welcome! Yes, I don't see many people actively critiquing so I thought I'd try my hand 
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Well, as you can see I myself don't even have time to draw anything, so critiquing is even one step farther. Probably most people have this problem...
Very true though
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You are so welcome! oh and will you draw Classic Daisy or Classic Peach to?
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Maybe if I get to it. I've got so many projects and so little time ^^
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Wow...I love how the picture draws your focus to the- shell. Yep, the shell- that's what I'm staring at...
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Guiding the watchers eye is the most important thing an artist must think about. They did not say where they ahould be guided
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Well my eyes can be guided, but slip away sometimes.... lol
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lololo ok sie hätt ich dir gar nicht zugetraut XD Auch wenn es für nen "Kollegen" is
Aber sieht sexy aus 
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Hä wieso denn nicht? ^^ ist doch ein ganz interessanter Character
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dunno why XD is iwie zu brav für dich
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Naja um ehrlich zu sein ist mir nix gscheites eingefallen und dann hab ich halt improvisiert ^^
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Oh my goodness! The Star Goddess is beautiful! This is jaw dropping!
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Thanks so much! I feel really honored c: *closes your jaw again*
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