Comments: 9
oDominic [2011-08-20 04:54:45 +0000 UTC]
Great attention to detail, especially the creases on her top. Also, well done contrasting the red hair to the rest of the picture. Stands out nicely.
Fantastic job!
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SHA-N In reply to oDominic [2011-08-21 05:51:58 +0000 UTC]
Eh? You really like this one? The more I look at it the more I hate it. QQ
But thank you, really. I'm glad you like it! I did focus mainly both on the lighting/shading and the contrast of hair. c:
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oDominic In reply to SHA-N [2011-08-21 06:43:29 +0000 UTC]
Yep, absolutely. Not just that though, something about this makes me feel happy. I dont know what, but it's probably her sly-ish smile and mysterious expression, which makes me wonder what she's thinking about.
And oh yeh, the boobs are nice too.
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SHA-N In reply to oDominic [2011-08-21 22:50:59 +0000 UTC]
Mysterious expression, hm? That reminds me of the Mona Lisa. I guess her face does look pretty serene. I like that you thought that in-depth about this piece. c:
Lul. Boobs. Yes, delicious.
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SHA-N [2011-06-21 04:39:10 +0000 UTC]
HA! I know. Six hours is a long time. But that's only because I'm so slow and my lines are all wobbly, so I've the urge to fix them over and over again. T__T Haha.
Thank you for the comments, critiques and suggestions! You're completely right about the breast part. I did add them in after drawing the basics of the body. xD The shading on her left breast is weird, I agree, but I guess I didn't notice it before. D: What do you mean about the tone of the hair? I actually only used on shade of red, but used lighter and darker tones. I tried to add some tones to the skin (adding browns and pinks to the peach), but it does still look too light with the white background, huh? Ehehe. What can I do about that.
I used a Wacom Bamboo Pen tablet, with the Corel Painter Essentials 4 program. It's the only thing that I have, haha.
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SHA-N In reply to H-Everybody-Lies--MD [2011-06-23 03:21:40 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, really though. It's extremely irritating when that happnens, and I just wanna throw the whole drawing out point blank. LOL.
Haha! Good job. I see how her boobs look a bit awkwarddd.
I understand what you're saying about the hair. O: So hard to color in braided hair. I'll pay attention to that next time, hehe. (:
>>> I need to draw tanner people. Problem solved. HAHA.
Oh, and the tablet was about $100. It was a Christmas present from two years ago. 8D
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H-Everybody-Lies--MD [2011-06-21 02:25:23 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Six hours? That's some dedication right there!!
But I think it was worth it! This looks great!
I like the pose a lot and I love how you did the hair, the color is great and the detail on it is marvelous as well!
I like how you played with the tones of it, though I would be curious to see what the color would look like if it was a one-toned kind of red. I do like the facial expression though, and the color of the shirt is nice too. The shine and darkened tones to it kind of make me think of something metallic.
I do think the breasts look a little odd here though, to me, it just appears that you drew the body first, then added in the breasts after. I think it's a little odd especially in that left side, with that defining line there. But, then again, I'm not an expert on breasts XD
I think if you added some more color to the skin itself it'd look nicer too, just because the background is also pretty bright so it counter-acts with the figure in a negative way.
BUT the essence of it is good. I can tell that you put effort into it, and it's even better that you kept at it!
And....Oh! What kind of instrument did you use to make this?
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