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Shabazik — First Crush
Published: 2010-08-22 00:22:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 8235; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 348
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"...I heared somewhere that today is your birthday, so..." Quiebrahuesos blushed "I make this, and wanted to give it to you."
Quiebrahuesos smiled nerviously, as she gave the gift she made.
The Shaman of the Orc village of Brukothuz locked had him, had the gift, and said.
"And for what I want such a ugly thing?"
"But! Is some kind of candlestick or a lamp! and I made it from a skull!"
"Bah."
The Shaman simply walked away, and Quiebrahuesos had her hearth crushed... it was her first serious crush, but the Shaman of the village only see in her, as the other orcs, only a ugly little girl, and in this case, the new, failed apprentice.
she sighted...
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Happy birthday! -today or tomorrow, depending of how is the time zone where you are.
:3
And you orc-self is Mean! XD
and what is the skull of Bonez thinking?
Bonez: "...great how come all the cute weirdo's want to cut my head off and use it as a candle holder!"
:3
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Poor girl...to be cursed by being born so ugly...Too bad she was raised by Orcs XD
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It is so sweet! Poor Quiebrahuesos but she worth better men than stupid shaman.
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Magilla gorilla must be blind or something.eather that or orcs have a radicaly difrent idea of beuty.Shes a pretty orc and that gift came straight frome the heart.*Cracks knuckles and brandishes a lewie vill slugger with a rusty nine inch nail through it*Ima see if i can fix his eye sight.
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Orcs do have a radically different idea of beauty:
THIS it's a beautiful orc:
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Compare her flat nose, sunken eyes, small forehead, Large Fangs, Powerfull Jaw of Iron... Broad Shoulders, Short legs, Long arms, Hard skin, grease and fatness and as well, her small ears.
Then compare Quiebrahuesos, who it's basically nothing of their ideal of beauty ! 
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She should go hang with humans then.I can emagine men trampling over one another to propoze to her.or....maby elfs :3
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well... you should read Quiebrahuesos story then. <(^_^)>
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Yea i did read most of it.Its a great story.I can sort of see were its going but it is enjoyable all the same.I plan on finding the first page and filling in the bits i missed.has the story been finished?If so you should put her in another one.
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I plan on finishing it, but I need to finish it. XD
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please hurry :3
Im usualy a leasure reader but i tend to speed read when i get ingrosed in a story. :3
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The 'skulls as cups' jokes XD
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wow ork me is a jerk, but who can blame him? its a cultural thing... and i didnt even know orks used candles
Bonez: ...great how come all the cute weirdo's want to cut my head off and use it as a candle holder!
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XD
Edited! so Bonez speak like Bonez :3
And of course Orcs can use candles!
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