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Savachika [2013-03-06 09:33:00 +0000 UTC]
Excellent! Corvin looks like medieval South Siberian or Ural hunter.
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theubbergeek2 [2011-12-08 05:54:42 +0000 UTC]
The gilr is really lucky.... it's dangerous to wander in the wilderness, specially the encroaching Dusk Age...
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NamelessManic [2011-10-25 01:40:21 +0000 UTC]
That is the dreaded general Dahlie Dahl'Arak? Omg!
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diogenes-von-wien [2011-10-22 07:51:41 +0000 UTC]
Not a Banshee, but wails like one. Well, she has reason ...
And there's mercy, this offspin of a universial kind of love ...
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Shabazik In reply to diogenes-von-wien [2011-10-22 15:32:58 +0000 UTC]
she is afraid in an alien, hostile place... so she have indeed a reason. X3
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larqven [2011-10-22 06:55:38 +0000 UTC]
Extremely cool pic! The night storm pic is excellent! Light and shadows get the lightning and roiling clouds across to the mind of the viewer. Corving looks old, but still capable and even cool looking in his rain gear!
Amazing the fears Corvin has of the storms and wilderness? Rather creepy stuff of banshees and ghosts and other spirtits seeking to prey on travelers or trick them to their doom! I'd expect such fears of medieval folk, but more of humans than elves--though your fantasy folk do indeed behave more akin to tribes of humans rather than having very alien mindsets. Humans are strangers in a strange land--I'd expect them to be afraid of many things in their short lives. Elves might have seen it all before and are usually depicted as being more in tune with nature.
Of course some might say that the elves are superstitious because they are close to nature? In Corvin's case, brain damage from earlier exposure to mercury might be causing a slow and ongoing degeneration of his faculties?
The drow girl looks like a Dahl'Arak? A tiny Dahlie?! Or a very young Rhea who followed her mother to the surface because she couldn't wait to grow up? Corvin is old--but still has vitality in his bones. He must, despite some let-down of a great adventurer becomng a humble pedler--being a pedler on the road is no picnic! One must have a fitness and strength just to do it!
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Shabazik In reply to larqven [2011-10-22 15:37:10 +0000 UTC]
In Aeirs, there are as much ghosts and the like like in Earth: many people are sure they exist, other are sceptic, and other wait to comprobate their existence:
So ghosts and banshees are part of the folklore, rather than real dangers, at least in Aiers: but despise his past as adventurer -or because of it!- Corvin had seen much, and many things he don't understand, so he believe in such things! !
exposure to mercury and esquizofrenia may help as well in that. XO!
the drow girl is, at least, a Dahl'Arak (if she is a NegeΓ©mi and not from other drow culture, without significance the use of these headbands)
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larqven In reply to Shabazik [2011-10-22 22:49:36 +0000 UTC]
So the little girl's identity as very young Dahl'Arak is still open to question? She does certainly resemble Dahlie!
Yeah, I was sort of wondering if mercury poisoning might have played a part in Corvin's fears. He still be reasonably rational now, but mercury poisoning might have damaged him in subtle ways, and made him jittery. Probably would have ruined him for adventuring? The degenerative effects of aging probably is revealing the damage done by mercury more and more?
He must have been a virile, and powerful man in his youth and prime? Certainly he had skill and luck to have a career as an adventurer and peddler to have survived as long as he has. It occurs to me that elves will almost never see an aged elf? It is said that if humans were "immortal", they would still live only a few hundred years or so before likely dying in an accident. A man who is older than a few hundred years, and has taken part in multiple battles, and wars, and has taken more than a peasant's share of risks and has still survived is incredible!
Despite honors for his age, just being old makes him different, and serves as a reminder of the ravages of age and the ugliness and disabilities that age causes? Being sufficiently aged alone might make him an object of scorn as if he were 'diseased"?
Corvin has "old man disease"?! Surely the neurological damage compounds the problem by making him senile as well as old?
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Shabazik In reply to larqven [2011-10-23 20:48:27 +0000 UTC]
not anymore, but I wanted to finish the mini-story to say clearly the identity of the girl. :3
But you are right: Corvin is, for example, the eldest elf (and drow) Briiza had ever know, and is the elder of the Village:
Of all my elves, only Akhara is older than him! :3
Few elves reach even such advanced ages, anyway: either from very rich families, or being very lucky themselves!
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Shabazik In reply to JCkross [2011-10-21 23:13:19 +0000 UTC]
gracias! X3
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doomie220 [2011-10-21 19:36:12 +0000 UTC]
I sense connections all over this story I just know it!
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doomie220 In reply to Shabazik [2011-10-26 17:28:28 +0000 UTC]
You know something about those connections don't you!
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Elsasgirlfriend [2011-10-21 18:32:20 +0000 UTC]
Why is it that I got a feeling that May, The Trio, the Hermit, and Dahl'arak are all connected by this one moment in time?
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Shabazik In reply to Elsasgirlfriend [2011-10-21 23:14:03 +0000 UTC]
Well, I don't know. XD
maybe? maybe not?
DUN DUN DUN!
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Elsasgirlfriend In reply to Shabazik [2011-10-22 00:57:10 +0000 UTC]
I think you missed the implied joke.... Oh, well. Nice work man. Loving the story thus far.
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Billie-Bonce [2011-10-21 17:51:59 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Amazing story, and great picture! Poor little thing!
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Shabazik In reply to Billie-Bonce [2011-10-21 23:14:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! X3
Poor little lost drowling! D:
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animal-delos [2011-10-21 17:29:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh my is that a Dahl'arak headband I see...? o.o could this be a very very young Dahlie?!?!?!
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