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Shabazik β€” Not a Banshee

Published: 2011-10-21 17:08:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 9548; Favourites: 85; Downloads: 382
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As the wind blow in the mountains of Nohalion, twisting the trees and breaking the branches, the lonely wanderer pray under his robbes to his gods, asking for protection in a storm that wasn't easing, but getting worse for moments.

As the lighting and thunders sliced throught the sky and the rain continued to hit his face, he began to pray then for the elder gods, the christian one and any other he remembered in that moment:

It was a terrible night, of monsters, ghosts and witches, not for a traveler merchant looking for some refugee as the storm ragged: but he feared entering in a cave to escape of the rain: he could fall there in the clutches of wild beasts and ogres, if not something worse...

Then, between one thunder and other, he heared the cry of a child:

First of all, he thought that it was a banshee or a ghost, waiting to lure travelers away from the road to kill them, or so they fall from a cliff or drown in a mountain river.

Here it was again...

His instict tell him to leave, quick: escape, and go far away.
Unless it was the trap of other kind of ghost, wanting to scare their victims to run into their deaths, falling from a cliff.

Damn, he didn't know what to do, when he heared it again... so finally, he decided to go to check, carefully, what was going:

He advanced across the sinister woods, until he finally found the source of the cries.

"You aren't a banshee, eh?" he said, smiling, as he knelt:

there was, afraid in the middle of the storm, a small girl panicked, covered in mud and crying: She had as well her foot trapped in what was a trap put there by a hunterto hunt foxes and rabbits, but so far the little shacking girl had only caused arm to her leg, as she tried to get freee from the metal wire that had her ankle trapped.

"And you are larger than a rabbit"

The girl looked to him, with her red eyes full of tears

"Damn!" thought Corvin, the mountain elf, backing a bit and searching with his hand the hilt of his knife, looking around for possible attackers, fearing that this was indeed an ambush...

But there was no one around, except of the little girl who cried when a lighting iluminated the sky.

There was no one, he thought. From where this girl come then?

She was a drow...
Every Hebonnor should kill a drow in the surface if they ever find one, or so said the law of the feudal lords, enacted after the last raids they have being doing there.
Not only that, but he have fight himself with drows, back in his times of adventurer.

The girl cried again, as other lighting fall from the sky, crying in her own language for her goddess and mother.

He can't leave the little thing soaked and covered in mud there, he decided... specially if not knowing who was the hunter who placed the rabbit's trap: because he wished no one the destiny of ending as the snack of an ogre or some goblins.

"Come here" he said, coming closer to the girl, who, afraid of him, began to struggle and kick, making even more difficult to take away the metal wire from her leg. "Easy! Easy dammit!" said the elf, before finally freeing the drow child.

"There" he said.

The little girl looked alternatively to him and the broken trap, doubting:

But when a lighting fall almost above them, cracking stones, and with the thunder roar, the drow girl yelped, and jumped to the old elf arms..

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Comments: 35

GoddessYukiWinters [2014-10-06 21:02:50 +0000 UTC]

i wanna read moar! >u<

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Shabazik In reply to GoddessYukiWinters [2014-10-07 03:22:50 +0000 UTC]

<( >u< )>

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GoddessYukiWinters In reply to Shabazik [2014-10-07 03:55:08 +0000 UTC]

<(OuO)> *wiggles arms*

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Savachika [2013-03-06 09:33:00 +0000 UTC]

Excellent! Corvin looks like medieval South Siberian or Ural hunter.

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Shabazik In reply to Savachika [2013-03-07 13:14:27 +0000 UTC]

:3

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theubbergeek2 [2011-12-08 05:54:42 +0000 UTC]

The gilr is really lucky.... it's dangerous to wander in the wilderness, specially the encroaching Dusk Age...

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Shabazik In reply to theubbergeek2 [2011-12-08 12:25:00 +0000 UTC]

D:

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theubbergeek2 In reply to Shabazik [2011-12-08 22:54:45 +0000 UTC]

Like Bush Dogs.... D:

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NamelessManic [2011-10-25 01:40:21 +0000 UTC]

That is the dreaded general Dahlie Dahl'Arak? Omg!

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Shabazik In reply to NamelessManic [2011-10-25 04:31:34 +0000 UTC]

D:!

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NamelessManic In reply to Shabazik [2011-11-03 04:31:26 +0000 UTC]

So cute @.@

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Shabazik In reply to NamelessManic [2011-11-03 13:15:43 +0000 UTC]

X3

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AngelicAdonis [2011-10-24 15:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done man! I really like how your artistic style has grown in the last few months!

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Shabazik In reply to AngelicAdonis [2011-10-24 16:04:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks! X3

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AngelicAdonis In reply to Shabazik [2011-10-27 04:43:47 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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diogenes-von-wien [2011-10-22 07:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Not a Banshee, but wails like one. Well, she has reason ...
And there's mercy, this offspin of a universial kind of love ...

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Shabazik In reply to diogenes-von-wien [2011-10-22 15:32:58 +0000 UTC]

she is afraid in an alien, hostile place... so she have indeed a reason. X3

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diogenes-von-wien In reply to Shabazik [2011-10-23 05:08:34 +0000 UTC]

Indeed.

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larqven [2011-10-22 06:55:38 +0000 UTC]

Extremely cool pic! The night storm pic is excellent! Light and shadows get the lightning and roiling clouds across to the mind of the viewer. Corving looks old, but still capable and even cool looking in his rain gear!

Amazing the fears Corvin has of the storms and wilderness? Rather creepy stuff of banshees and ghosts and other spirtits seeking to prey on travelers or trick them to their doom! I'd expect such fears of medieval folk, but more of humans than elves--though your fantasy folk do indeed behave more akin to tribes of humans rather than having very alien mindsets. Humans are strangers in a strange land--I'd expect them to be afraid of many things in their short lives. Elves might have seen it all before and are usually depicted as being more in tune with nature.

Of course some might say that the elves are superstitious because they are close to nature? In Corvin's case, brain damage from earlier exposure to mercury might be causing a slow and ongoing degeneration of his faculties?

The drow girl looks like a Dahl'Arak? A tiny Dahlie?! Or a very young Rhea who followed her mother to the surface because she couldn't wait to grow up? Corvin is old--but still has vitality in his bones. He must, despite some let-down of a great adventurer becomng a humble pedler--being a pedler on the road is no picnic! One must have a fitness and strength just to do it!

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Shabazik In reply to larqven [2011-10-22 15:37:10 +0000 UTC]

In Aeirs, there are as much ghosts and the like like in Earth: many people are sure they exist, other are sceptic, and other wait to comprobate their existence:

So ghosts and banshees are part of the folklore, rather than real dangers, at least in Aiers: but despise his past as adventurer -or because of it!- Corvin had seen much, and many things he don't understand, so he believe in such things! !
exposure to mercury and esquizofrenia may help as well in that. XO!

the drow girl is, at least, a Dahl'Arak (if she is a NegeΓ©mi and not from other drow culture, without significance the use of these headbands)

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larqven In reply to Shabazik [2011-10-22 22:49:36 +0000 UTC]

So the little girl's identity as very young Dahl'Arak is still open to question? She does certainly resemble Dahlie!

Yeah, I was sort of wondering if mercury poisoning might have played a part in Corvin's fears. He still be reasonably rational now, but mercury poisoning might have damaged him in subtle ways, and made him jittery. Probably would have ruined him for adventuring? The degenerative effects of aging probably is revealing the damage done by mercury more and more?

He must have been a virile, and powerful man in his youth and prime? Certainly he had skill and luck to have a career as an adventurer and peddler to have survived as long as he has. It occurs to me that elves will almost never see an aged elf? It is said that if humans were "immortal", they would still live only a few hundred years or so before likely dying in an accident. A man who is older than a few hundred years, and has taken part in multiple battles, and wars, and has taken more than a peasant's share of risks and has still survived is incredible!

Despite honors for his age, just being old makes him different, and serves as a reminder of the ravages of age and the ugliness and disabilities that age causes? Being sufficiently aged alone might make him an object of scorn as if he were 'diseased"?

Corvin has "old man disease"?! Surely the neurological damage compounds the problem by making him senile as well as old?

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Shabazik In reply to larqven [2011-10-23 20:48:27 +0000 UTC]

not anymore, but I wanted to finish the mini-story to say clearly the identity of the girl. :3

But you are right: Corvin is, for example, the eldest elf (and drow) Briiza had ever know, and is the elder of the Village:

Of all my elves, only Akhara is older than him! :3
Few elves reach even such advanced ages, anyway: either from very rich families, or being very lucky themselves!

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JCkross [2011-10-21 21:02:11 +0000 UTC]

Podrias hacer con estos detallados un comic sombrio nice mi amigo

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Shabazik In reply to JCkross [2011-10-21 23:13:19 +0000 UTC]

gracias! X3

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doomie220 [2011-10-21 19:36:12 +0000 UTC]

I sense connections all over this story I just know it!

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Shabazik In reply to doomie220 [2011-10-21 23:13:29 +0000 UTC]

!

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doomie220 In reply to Shabazik [2011-10-26 17:28:28 +0000 UTC]

You know something about those connections don't you!

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Elsasgirlfriend [2011-10-21 18:32:20 +0000 UTC]

Why is it that I got a feeling that May, The Trio, the Hermit, and Dahl'arak are all connected by this one moment in time?

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Shabazik In reply to Elsasgirlfriend [2011-10-21 23:14:03 +0000 UTC]

Well, I don't know. XD
maybe? maybe not?

DUN DUN DUN!

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Elsasgirlfriend In reply to Shabazik [2011-10-22 00:57:10 +0000 UTC]

I think you missed the implied joke.... Oh, well. Nice work man. Loving the story thus far.

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Shabazik In reply to Elsasgirlfriend [2011-10-22 03:55:13 +0000 UTC]

sorry for that then XD

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Billie-Bonce [2011-10-21 17:51:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Amazing story, and great picture! Poor little thing!

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Shabazik In reply to Billie-Bonce [2011-10-21 23:14:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! X3

Poor little lost drowling! D:

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animal-delos [2011-10-21 17:29:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh my is that a Dahl'arak headband I see...? o.o could this be a very very young Dahlie?!?!?!

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Shabazik In reply to animal-delos [2011-10-21 23:21:54 +0000 UTC]

<(O_O)>!!

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