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Commission for , of his character Maylara Maltree.
He gave me as well a text for the image, that I can slighty modify for my universe of Aiers...
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In the mountains of Nohalion, in the edges of what once was the great kingdom of Galawkey, only several small villages of shepperds and goatkeepers where the only remanent of the once great Mountain Elf kingdom of the Hebonnor:

In these small villages, the live wasn't easy, and allways was need to be in alert, ready to defend their cattle and lifes from the raiders or invaders -as black orcs of Tok Thoria, Loranor Wild People, and as well drows and goblins from the underworld, who make some raids to the surface, from the caves and acsess in the mountains...

But as well, along with the hard life, there isn't to much to do... and so, in these small comunities, isolated in the mountains, every rumor quickly expand:

And in one of these villages, there where some wild rumours, surrounding a couple of goatherders: Aldabeer and Thaergrud:

A few years have passed since these rumors begin, when suddendly, the couple leaved the house of their grandparents, within the defenses of the village, and moved to a cottage, near the forests, without an apparent reason:

The villagers, stranged with this, invented excuses to visit the couple, but they finded nothing:

There where then rumors about sorcery, witchcraft, rusttling, smuggling, between many others, until one neighbor, spying in the night to the cottage, eared the crying of a child, and after that, somebody said that they had seen, playing in the near forests of the cottage, a small, furtive children:

Thaergrud, the wife of Aldabeer, was know for being infertile, and her future first born was aborted, before it was ready, and since then, she wasn't ever able of having children:

Some say then, she made a pact with the Moon, and that child was fruit of some kind of magic...
Other say that it was really the spirit of the unborn children, that haunted the couple... and others said that they stealed a baby from someone, and they where hidding their stealed boy...

A few years passed, and the rumors persisted, but they wheren't as juicy as in the beginning, until, finally, a day, Thaergrud and Aldabeer requested the villagers to gather, after the day of work, because they had news to share: and so, all the villagers, intrigated, finished they work early, and awaiting for the news, where drinking and discussing in the village square about all the rumors, trying to adventure what kind of news these will be...

And meanwhile they where gathering, drinking and discussing, the Mountain Elf couple where leaving their cottage:

....A few years had passed since the elf couple had found a baby Drow and decided to take her in and raise her as their own. Thaergrud and Aldabeer, despise the curiosity of their neighboars, were able to keep things a secret for awhile -or only as rumors- but it was time to reveal their adopted daughter Maylara Maltree to the village, and better for them to be front about it then for it to be discovered, than somebody curious enough to break in their cottage and find with horror what many Hebonnor (mountain elfs) find a kind of monster: a Drow.

The elf mother urged a young May to follow her out to the village square, and Maylara nervously hid behind her adoptive mother's leg, clinging to it as they walked.

The male elf, Aldabeer, reluctantly follow, knowing that there was almost no way that this was going to end well. Especially not once the village elders found out.

When they entered in the village square, they where surprised to find out that all the town, and even some Hebonnor from the nearing area, where here, to hear about the news, that they hoped, involved witchcraft, banned sorcery, spirits, witchs and abominations...

And upon their enterig in the square, there was several shocked looks, as well as some disgusted ones, even some vicious ones.

-and a few where upset: they finished earlier they work only to see a drow kid? Reality sucks. They wanted to see a child of the Moon!-

One of the elves of the crowd, a rubicund lumberer with a golden beard, with the face red for all the alcohol he ingested in the day, awaiting for the news, was the first to voice outrage.

"How dare you bring one of those vile spawns of evil to this village!"

Another elf, a know rusttler and smuggler, who in one of his journeys to a human kingdom in the low lands get himself a disease of sexual transmision, yelled out.

"You've compromised the purity and integrity of our entire population!"

a few people laughed had the indignity of the syphilic elf... but the bulk of them where too angry and disapointed for that:

There were more jeers and comments from the crowd, and the very young May didn't understand what was going on and just clung closer to her adoptive mother, burying her face into her leg.

Thaergrud just looked pleadingly with the crowd, Aldabeer just had to stand off to the side and watch, he knew anything he'd say wouldn't help any and it was up to her to make them change their views. She spoke with the crowd as one.

"Please! Everybody calm down and hear me out! She is but a child, a newborn when we happened upon her whose parents were killed by raiders. It would not have been right, our god would not have justified abandoning an innocent creature, let alone a baby."

The crowd just roared, phrases like "But it's a Drow!" "Monster!" "Unworthy!" were shouted amongts the various villagers.

Thaergrud just continued to beg the crowd to show compassion.

"Please, do not judge her by WHAT she is, give her a chance. Look at her, she's no different from any other child in her position, scared and confused. How many of you have raised wild animals from pups that turned out decent creatures. We have raised her right so far and will continue to do so, she will be a decent person."

There were whispers and inward discussions amongst the the crowd, one of the village elders stepped forward and raised a hand which immediately caused silence among the villagers for them to speak.

"How dare the lot of you, yes, Thaergrud broke part of our laws, bringing an outsider in, and a Drow no less...
But on the other hand, we are a peaceful people. And our Gods -well, maybe one, but he doesn't count- would not have condoned actions as she spoke, rather she took the right ones according to our faith, and in this village, our faith takes precedence over our laws.
As an elder of this village, I cannot deny them the right to protect the life that which they have saved, that is part of our laws, and our faith alike.
However I cannot also ask all of you to accept their actions, so I have to leave it in your hands, but I will say that should anyone raise an evil hand against that child will find themselves in exile."

The crowd whispered some grumbled things and then began to disperse -mostly go to the tavern, anyway... there where some juicy new rumors about a witch in a cave that was having sexual relations with beasts, anyway-.

The new elf family sighed, having done all they can for now and proceeded back to their home, with a very quiet May just clinging tightly to her mother's leg trying to comprehend whatever just happened, her insightful eyes just staring into the distance.

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Comments: 29

OhMyGoshItJosh [2013-09-19 19:40:09 +0000 UTC]

when i here the word mountain i can't help but think of the rednecks living up in the mountains here in the USA

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Shabazik In reply to OhMyGoshItJosh [2013-09-26 14:06:13 +0000 UTC]

XD It all depends of each person experiences, what some words will bring them memory to!

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OhMyGoshItJosh In reply to Shabazik [2013-09-26 20:24:21 +0000 UTC]

sorry spelling mistake wearing not living

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OhMyGoshItJosh In reply to Shabazik [2013-09-26 20:23:41 +0000 UTC]

Since these are basically based off of viking culture they would not be redneck, so i can't draw a modern elf living in a log cabin, living jeans, plaid button down, and other stereotypical mountain redneck items, as i was going to draw him. 

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Shabazik In reply to OhMyGoshItJosh [2013-09-27 04:58:06 +0000 UTC]

you can if you want, thought. XD

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OhMyGoshItJosh In reply to Shabazik [2013-09-27 08:47:18 +0000 UTC]

i just did :3

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OhMyGoshItJosh In reply to Shabazik [2013-09-26 20:19:56 +0000 UTC]

LOL yeah

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larqven [2013-07-11 16:48:45 +0000 UTC]

"who in one of his journeys to a human kingdom in the low lands get himself a disease of sexual transmission", and "a few people laughed had the indignity of the syphilic elf". Elves are blessed with long lives, aided doubtlessly by their auras making them virtually disease free. But even elves can contract syphilis it seems? Or at least some unlucky elves might? They might carry the disease with few symptoms?

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Shabazik In reply to larqven [2013-07-11 17:45:14 +0000 UTC]

It's uncommon, and is contracted when having sexual-relations with non-elves (humans in this case), so that's the double the reasons the other villages laughed from what he said!

It's not very common, but is possible. The elves do get few diseases and illness, but get some after all!

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larqven In reply to Shabazik [2013-07-12 01:17:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the information!

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Savachika [2013-03-06 18:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Very good. I can not chose what character I like more because all are so good drawn! Maybe Thaergrud and elf with beard are best.

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Shabazik In reply to Savachika [2013-03-06 20:45:33 +0000 UTC]

<(^-^)>

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NamelessManic [2010-09-25 21:58:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow, nice read. And little drow is very cute

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Shabazik In reply to NamelessManic [2010-09-26 13:48:45 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks! :3

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NamelessManic In reply to Shabazik [2010-09-27 17:52:26 +0000 UTC]

No prob!

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TriffRaff [2010-09-14 13:18:46 +0000 UTC]

Elves in heavy furs....There's a look you don't see too often...

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Shabazik In reply to TriffRaff [2010-09-14 13:37:54 +0000 UTC]

XD

That is true... but if you live in the mountains, better to have warm clothes of fur and whool, than to freeze your brain!

:3

-These are Hebonnor, or Mountain elfs, one of my several elfs civilizations (thought these ones are only herders, and not very impressive )

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larqven [2010-09-14 02:27:55 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanks for all of your response!

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Shabazik In reply to larqven [2010-09-14 05:46:44 +0000 UTC]

No problem! :3

I like to explain my worlds...

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Icyshadowlord [2010-09-13 18:34:51 +0000 UTC]

Good to see that they protected her in the end =O

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Shabazik In reply to Icyshadowlord [2010-09-13 20:31:10 +0000 UTC]

...yeah... only in the end. :3

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Icyshadowlord In reply to Shabazik [2010-09-14 12:09:51 +0000 UTC]

Still =O

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larqven [2010-09-13 16:14:06 +0000 UTC]

As usual, a great story and fine pic including a beautiful mountain scene!

Loved the bit how the Maylara the drow child failed to quite live up to the sordid expectations of the villagers. What? It is only a drow child! I am glad of how events played out; drow are 'painted black' by elven religion, but the possibility of reconcilliation should the drow just accept it is always there. You covered the emotional, quick changing nature of elves and their generally benign and practical side as well. Elves so often are a contradiction in many ways--makes portrayals of them difficult and interesting. If played as written--a logical extension of elf behavior might include sudden violence followed by almost immediate remorse. One might suppose that a long life might provide wisdom to perhaps suppress an innate tendency to make sudden, unwise actions?

I'm surprised that the parents were able to keep Maylara a secret for so long in the village. Of course an elven village is likely different and more spread out than the human equivalent. The guy in the background with the beard looks unusual for an elf! A half or quarter human perhaps?

The building looks perhaps too ordinary for an elven village--although if I were you I would be at a loss as to what a typical elven house or structure should look like. Elves either live in grandiose structures, or homes carved out of rock in the mountains, or simple tents with precious little examples between those two extremes. I dislike the elven 'treehouses' as they are unrealistic even for a small people; some sort of 'wigwam' or partially buried earthen lodge type house makes some sense perhaps? It would make sense if elves are borrowing some architecture from humans; the steep roof would help keep snow from accumulating too much in winter. Indeed, the building is probably fairly low to the ground by human standards!

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Shabazik In reply to larqven [2010-09-13 16:50:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you liked it. :3

... and yeah: yay! for the rumors and expectatives XD.

The guy in the background?... Well... I had several races of elves, and within races, tehre are several civilizations...

Between the "Light elfs", there are the "rossnes elfs" -like the High Elfs, Grey Elfs, Silvan Elfs, Wild Elfs, etc-, and one of the Rossnes elfs nations are the Hebonnor, or mountain elfs.

The Mountain elfs, in general, tend to live -as their name say so- within the mountain ranges, in narrow valleys between the mountains.

They where a bunch of small villages and castles scattered, and they aren't as impressive as the High Elfs of Dark Elfs, being herders and farmers, and lacking a united state able to movilizate the society as working force:

The Mountain Elfs and they small comunities only gathered together, when attacked by the ancient Drow empire -before it colapsed, and only the underworld colonies in Kazrrad resisted-, and after that, they come back to their petty fighting and quarrels between villages:

After that, they where conquered by the "Galaw Orcs", a race of orcs in my world very advanced, who make the Hebonnor vassals, and latter, due inter-relations, it was founded a great Galaw Orc-Hebonnor Elf kingdom of Galawkey:

Kingdom that latter fall due the attacks of High Elfs, who stopped their expansion to the Highlands and the Plains, and the final push of the "age of invasions", when Humans invaded they lower lands, destroying the kingdom, and limitating the Hebonnor elfs to their worse lands and more difficult to invade, within the mountains...

So:

The architecture of the Mountain Elfs, as with the Wild Elfs, isn't impresionant: only what small comunities and scattered villages can do -cottages, villages with palisades, maybe a mountain fort in "castro" style (that is a "flee-fort": when the enemy come, the population run to the defenses), but there are some more impressive remanents of the Galawkey kingdom...

-the house is very low, mostly because is the acsess to a larger house -maybe you can see that in other drawing?-

Also, as you can see, the Mountain Elves, or Hebonnor, have been invaded several times... and as remanent of the Orc-Elf kingdom of Galawkey, is sign of nobles having a short life span (due breeding).

But, aside from that, with the Mountain elfs is more common that with any other elfs, to see beards, moustaches, and big eyebrows.

:3

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animal-delos [2010-09-13 15:16:46 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work as usual. ^^ I think you captured the village atmosphere and expressions flawlessly. The next one will be very interesting. *nodnod*

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Shabazik In reply to animal-delos [2010-09-13 16:50:40 +0000 UTC]

:3

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AngelicAdonis [2010-09-13 15:06:49 +0000 UTC]

Thats pretty cool. Nice story as well!

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Shabazik In reply to AngelicAdonis [2010-09-13 16:50:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! :3

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AngelicAdonis In reply to Shabazik [2010-09-15 16:18:31 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome man!

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