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Published: 2010-10-02 12:44:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 15137; Favourites: 122; Downloads: 462
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Comission for , of his character Maylara Maltree.

... Damn scanner deprivation, art block and low quality result drawings, and Diablo II, as with all of that, I haven't upload anything in so much time

And Animal-delos asked me to write this part of the story... WHY!?? XP

I really don't know how to write it, and how his character will react to slavery... but I was bored of having this last pic(s) around, so I will upload them... whatever the result will become.
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"Do you see May? It isn't difficult to write... Now don't be shy, and write what I ordered you to learn... or the "teacher" will need to "punish" you again?"

She was, no to long ago, a Hebonnor: an elf from the Mountains of Nohalion... or had least, she was the adoptive daughter of a Hebonnor couple, and all her life, she was raised as one, despise the prejudgements...

More recently, she became an adventurer: a rogue, and with her only childhood friend, they where part of the adventuring parties hired by the Trading City State of Zannas...

But now, she, Maylara Maltree, was only a slave.

Her party was ambushed by goblins, and sold in slavery to Dwarven traders, and soon she and her friend, a mountain elf maiden called Neroe, where on their way to the Underworld of Kazrrad...

Despise being ethnically a drow elf, May had never, since she had memory, being there, as any other elf of her village back in Nohalion...

And because of that she was selled in the underworld, rather than the surface:

The slave dealers decided that a drow from the surface, raised away from the drow societies, will be a submissive female... a jewel often unseen by the drow males of the underworld.

And so, despise her lack of training to be a domestic slave, she fetched a good price, when selled in a black market of slaves, in an outpost near the surface.

She was bought by an interested male trader from the Drow City-State of Negeémiliel: the largest of all the drow cities, wich will become her (unwanted) home for a time.

Her time as slave, and all the humilliations, pain and degradation that meaned, as her training, is a period she rather forget and not talk about...

So instead of concentrating in her misery, she tried to figure out a way to escape, as a rogue she was...

But she didn't know about the Underworld, and less the way out of it.

To escape, only to leave the trader house was a problem:
First of all, she was a "secret" slave from her master, keeped apart from the rest of the house, and secluded to a few rooms: Her master bought her without asking her wife... and a sex slave is a restricted right for a female, not a male, drow...
So she was the little dirty secret of her owner, who allways needed to hide her when the Matron of the House, his wife, arrived...

So if she was able to escape from these rooms, she need then to leave the house: a house from a very pudient family, the small palace was builded hanging into the roof of one of the many caverns that togheter become the dense populated city of Negeémiliel, eliminating any possibility to escape from the windows or balconies, but the only two doors: the main and service doors: heavy doors of iron, and guarded...

And even if she was able to leave then, she will find herself into a city gigantic and unknow to her, as their culture and language, and the possition relative to the surface...

And she didn't need to escape alone, but she wanted to find her childhood friend, selled as well as slave into the underground city: Neroe...

That was the reason, when her owner, between other trainings that where parts of her duties, teached her drow language, writing and reading Negeelí, the language of Negeémiliel, as well some bits from the drow culture of the city, she treasured that information.

To him, he was only role-playing as a teacher with a nasty student, and was a foreplay...

For her, these moments was when her escape plans began to be builded, determinated that once she know enough, and was able to build a food reserve -saving a little had each meal-, get some (real) clothes and money, she will escape...

but only to free Neroe first...

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Comments: 25

KageKamen [2022-04-29 22:21:37 +0000 UTC]

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Nephandu [2020-08-29 13:36:16 +0000 UTC]

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KageKamen In reply to Nephandu [2022-04-29 22:21:04 +0000 UTC]

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seionara [2016-03-06 11:05:41 +0000 UTC]

I just recently started reading your Maylara Maltree series and noticed that you seem to have some problems with irregular verbs, so I wanted to ask you if you would have anything against me correcting them. I'm not a native speaker but I'm somewhat good at English so I would probably find at least the most obvious ones.

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Shabazik In reply to seionara [2016-03-27 20:15:49 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks!

I worked on that story some years ago, and slowly I have been correcting my -poor- language skills, and have the help of a couple of native speakers: slowly, as I update some of the old pics, I update as well the stories trying to fix the mistakes...

many thanks for the offer of help, and sorry for my delayed answer!

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seionara In reply to Shabazik [2016-03-29 20:21:41 +0000 UTC]

don't worry, I think everyone takes a while to answer at times!

Should I just post the corrected text in  comment below the picture?

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doomie220 [2011-04-12 19:12:02 +0000 UTC]

Slaves school? Well ain't that stupid! XD

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Shabazik In reply to doomie220 [2011-04-12 23:25:29 +0000 UTC]

well, he had the "teacher-disciple" fantasy, and wanted an educated sex slave!

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doomie220 In reply to Shabazik [2011-04-13 00:03:12 +0000 UTC]

Dose Maytrlee evr escape that is the question!

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Shabazik In reply to doomie220 [2011-04-13 00:30:09 +0000 UTC]

:3

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doomie220 In reply to Shabazik [2011-04-13 18:09:19 +0000 UTC]

XD But for real I lost track on her adventures!

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Shabazik In reply to doomie220 [2011-04-13 20:51:54 +0000 UTC]

oh, well, I haven't done much of Maylara lately :3

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doomie220 In reply to Shabazik [2011-04-13 21:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh I see! I hope things go well for her! XD

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AngelicAdonis [2010-10-04 18:18:03 +0000 UTC]

Well thats pretty cool man, and nice improvised story as well

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Shabazik In reply to AngelicAdonis [2010-10-05 12:46:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! :3

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AngelicAdonis In reply to Shabazik [2010-10-05 15:37:23 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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larqven [2010-10-04 00:14:22 +0000 UTC]

Doubtlessly, this is terribly degrading and frustrating to experience for Maylara. But ever since I saw May and Neroe in 'Transaction', my thought was "Those poor adventurers--they're headed towards a one way trip either to the aptly named Temple of Doom or a life in the brothel or short life of extreme humiliation and twisted and severe slavery." There is certainly no shortage of pics and stories of drow cruelty casually and often severly inflicted on each other and certainly their slaves; with each new update, I could only read about May's life and say "You are so screwed!" But after getting all worried about them, and knowledge of May's inevital trip to sex slavery; this scene is almost comical. We get a single goofy master who has a bit of 'teacher, schoolgirl' fetish going on--in a manner of speaking, this guy is about the best sort of master May could have reasonably gotten!

I agree with TriffRaff--at the very, very least--May's master is going to be left 'holding an empty bag' with only memories! At worst--he might end up a castrated slave himself--or take that trip to the temple! So yeah, I actually sorta feel sorry for him!

Actually being a strong, spellcasting, female drow is an enormous benefit for May--her only set of cards to play in fact. Drow society is terribly dangerous and difficult navigate though, this story can certainly still go many different and unexpected directions.

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Shabazik In reply to larqven [2010-10-04 01:41:29 +0000 UTC]

Yay for unexpected directions!

And now, I can give the character salvation, redemption or condenation: yuhuuu! :3

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animal-delos [2010-10-03 20:57:02 +0000 UTC]

Yes, don't feel bad for her, she could at any time use her spellthief side and use her magic to kill him and break out, but the problem is break out to where, to what? So this is why she needs to play along and deal with what she has to in order to learn everything she needs to not only be able to pass as a citizen of Negeémiliel but to be able to communicate with people there to find out where Neroe is. *nodnod*

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Icyshadowlord [2010-10-03 08:58:55 +0000 UTC]

And she looks nice in that, but she has to break free =O

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Shabazik In reply to Icyshadowlord [2010-10-03 13:01:27 +0000 UTC]

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TriffRaff [2010-10-03 00:10:03 +0000 UTC]

Ah, blood usually wins out in these sorts of setting. Poor foolish man aught to know that. Makes you feel sorry for his eventaul fate. In a detached kind of way....

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Shabazik In reply to TriffRaff [2010-10-03 01:09:54 +0000 UTC]

XD

He should know better!

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larqven [2010-10-02 17:22:43 +0000 UTC]

Interesting. Playing the part of the student makes her ability to learn important facts possible. Learning to be drow literate is enormously important for her. She does need to learn more about the outside to have any hope of getting away!

Her master keeps her on a short leash--primarily out of necessity for him! Her restraints give her very little freedom of movement for her arms, even writing would be difficult. Of course, she is probably as strong as he is so it is only prudent! He might well have a healthy ingrained fear of females and fear of humiliating one even as he enjoys it.

It would be interesting and dangerous to see what would happen when his wife finds out!

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Shabazik In reply to larqven [2010-10-02 19:18:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I'm sure when his wife find this out, it is going to hurt! XD

(and yes... Maylara may be even stronger than him... and plus magic -he doesn't know she had- she out-match her... I mean: trader v/s rogue... )

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