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Published: 2012-12-09 17:53:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 2150; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 150
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An interpretation of the character of ~lukaner-Z , the mercenary orc Visceradora Machado. I'm not very happy with the result, thought
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JoshTheBirateLord [2014-01-03 20:35:17 +0000 UTC]

I like it well done

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Shabazik In reply to JoshTheBirateLord [2014-01-07 13:23:03 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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JoshTheBirateLord In reply to Shabazik [2014-01-07 21:25:43 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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lukaner-Z [2012-12-09 23:25:51 +0000 UTC]

about the gimnast thing,ok a bit more muscular,like a weight setter

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lukaner-Z In reply to lukaner-Z [2012-12-09 23:58:20 +0000 UTC]

just,something in between

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lukaner-Z [2012-12-09 23:20:32 +0000 UTC]

OMG, i can't believe you've drawned her,thank you so very much for it about the result thing my idea about her is that she has a sort of a more childlike face and a small,tough muscular body, like an olypic gymnast,actually i based her face on hiyori from bleach '3'

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Shabazik In reply to lukaner-Z [2012-12-09 23:47:48 +0000 UTC]

googling for Hiyori...

not much of an orc face, uh? XD

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lukaner-Z In reply to Shabazik [2012-12-09 23:56:34 +0000 UTC]

XD

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larqven [2012-12-09 21:34:48 +0000 UTC]

She has a lot of fierce personality in the version of Visceradora! I do like the ring-armor shirt, and the haress for holding that big axe on her back! The pose has a lot of dramatic power, as she is waiting for trouble from her position, hiding by the wall. She's going to be holding soldiers or raiders back? In the story, she's a mercenary for elves to defend Thilion lands was it? That would explain the field of grain in the background. Very nice use of crops as background!

Sword and shield are a useful combo--but the shield doesn't make sense with the axe?

Also, the dramatic lighting and shadow effect seems off here. The crops and surroundings make me think of day, but the light and deep shadows on Visceradora make it seem as if night? I suppose that the sun may be leaving her is shade from the wall? The direction of the shadows seem to be horizonantal? Like the sun is setting, or there is a fire in front of her? It would be hell to try and defend against attackers with the sun to their backs--and in the defender's face!

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Shabazik In reply to larqven [2012-12-09 21:54:48 +0000 UTC]

The problem here it's mostly, badly drawn legs.

Badly drawn legs I tried to cover with shadows.

Shadows that didn't solved anything, so I decided to cut them out of the drawing. But the drawing looked empty.

So I drawed a background.

Then I drawed something else by the side of Visceradora, and that's from where that wall come.

See? This it's the reason why I don't like this drawing. A pile of mistakes doesn't make it look consistent

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larqven In reply to Shabazik [2012-12-10 00:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh well, Visceradora still looks capable!

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Arnilo [2012-12-09 20:31:34 +0000 UTC]

Soooo huggable (okay, maybe huggable is a bad word for someone that you really, really want to see struggling to force their way out of big, furry creature hug)

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Shabazik In reply to Arnilo [2012-12-09 21:55:00 +0000 UTC]

yay for that definition of huggable. XD

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wardude69 [2012-12-09 19:00:28 +0000 UTC]

nice hair

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Shabazik In reply to wardude69 [2012-12-09 21:51:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks! X3

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IxisNyx [2012-12-09 18:35:43 +0000 UTC]

I see that ocrish blade again :3

*Takes the sword and runs*

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Shabazik In reply to IxisNyx [2012-12-09 18:51:13 +0000 UTC]

You better run fast from an orc, if you stole her blade! XD

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IxisNyx In reply to Shabazik [2012-12-10 01:34:25 +0000 UTC]

Not if i take the time to stab the orc before i run :3

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