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ShadinaLonesea โ Prologue Pg9
Published: 2011-05-04 22:16:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 2223; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 3
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WOW, another page in less than a month?! I'm on fire!!!
I'm starting to HATE this lineart-ed style of mine...
Maybe I'll slowly work my way into realism, so that you guys don't notice it?
Still, I worked hard on the light effects (ambient light color, reflected light etc) and I think I did alright.
And I just took my first (baby) steps into the realm of ugly-humans!
Heavens help me from now on, 'cuz they will be many! 
Critiques and comments very welcome,
specially about my writing, which sucks big time. 
And OOOOOOoooooH cliffhangers!
time taken: Less than a month
media: photoshop and tablet; 100% digital
references: none, at all!
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oh i cannot wait to see the next page !!!
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*lol*
will it be finished in the next time !?
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You mean, "will this chapter be over in the next page"?
No... unfortunately, this is going to take a few more pages than initially predicted.
But soon, I tell you! Soon.
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oups... i meant
if you are finishing the next pages soon
iยดm sorry---iยดm from germany (okay, thats not a real reason, i know...^^
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Well, should everything go according to planned, I should be able to finish the next page in about 2 weeks! 
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YAAY
sounds great ;D
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You're doing such an amazing job! Keep up the awesome work (: and nooooo leaving me with a cliffhanger! Bully! D: haha
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Yeah, I'm THAT evil!
Hopefully, though, it won't be long before the next page.
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wow, that was a fail haha XD *
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the stallion is in every drawing very well drawn. I LOVE THIS.
can't waiitt!! <3
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A note about spelling: in the first panel you said "tinny" when I assume you meant "tiny." the difference between the two being one describes a metal or metallic look or sound, whereas the latter of the two describes size.
Just thought I'd point that out to you. Good comic, though.
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Oh, I didn't know that "tinny" also meant something... 
Thanks for telling me about it, I'll put it on my list of things to fix!
Thank you.
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Also, businesses in the sense you used it refers to literal businesses (as in a store or something). You want business there. It just reads smoother. Subject verb agreement and all.
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i love this comic! especially the design of the stallion!
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I'm glad you like him!
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I just love your comic! I actually like the line-art style...it kinda gives it a comic book sort of feel. 
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I think it'd probably look weird to have a comic book with hyper-realistic horses all the time, but that's what I feel like drawing, right now...
Thanks!
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You never know, and it would be worth a try. :3 You could always take one of the older pages, make it more realistic and see what you think of it..and let us other deviants see it and compare it. I love your work either way, but it would be neat to see them side by side!
You're welcome!
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Now THAT is a good idea! 
Thanks again.
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Woohoo first to comment, vert nice and getting exciting
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