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Shadow--Cat — Gazing Upon Your Soul
Published: 2004-12-20 01:21:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description As I gaze into your soul
I see hatred and regret
You fly the flag of solitude
And hide from all the world.

As I look into your eyes
I see a bleakness settled there
You’ve lost faith in all the world
But I still have faith in you.
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Comments: 6

lildevil666 [2004-12-20 07:29:27 +0000 UTC]

yeah, its short, precise, and gets the message (if there is one) across easily

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Sacred-Phoenix [2004-12-20 04:46:24 +0000 UTC]

its lovely. I luv the ideas that you hav in this, and ther r reali gr8 concepts... well done

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Shadow--Cat In reply to Sacred-Phoenix [2004-12-20 04:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you, it seems that something useful came out of English after-all

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DarkVixenOfLight [2004-12-20 04:01:07 +0000 UTC]

Lol and I forgot to say- I see I'm not the only who writes poetry in English instead of doing the flag task or whatever XD

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DarkVixenOfLight [2004-12-20 03:55:55 +0000 UTC]

I likes it very much- short, but the concept is great

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ember-chan [2004-12-20 02:30:15 +0000 UTC]

..seems, to pessimistic ol' me, that it would be a bad idea to have faith in someone like that. but it's a nice poem.

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