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Published: 2004-09-06 06:35:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 143; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 17
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Description I quite like this one even though the head, neck, shoulder and arm aren't quite right. I wrote the poem to go with it after I drew the picture.
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Comments: 9

Shadowed-soul [2004-10-29 11:01:26 +0000 UTC]

Shouldn't this be submitted under poetry and prose? Because you can add a picture to that as well... but good poem

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Shadow--Cat In reply to Shadowed-soul [2004-10-29 23:27:20 +0000 UTC]

Well I sort of drew the picture first and wrote the poem to with it so...

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DarkVixenOfLight [2004-10-28 03:24:47 +0000 UTC]

Nice you should put up more of your poetry too ^^

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Shadow--Cat In reply to DarkVixenOfLight [2004-10-28 05:13:07 +0000 UTC]

I put all my poetry on fictionpress but I'll try.

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AnikiraDaimao [2004-09-22 04:40:06 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully drawn, and I don't really see the mistakes you mentioned in the description. Your poem works very well with the picture, too. Free verse is the style of the artist, and one of the best styles of poetry. So don't let anyone say your verse should rhyme.

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TheBefudledEmu [2004-09-06 06:52:37 +0000 UTC]

beautifully written.

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Shadow--Cat In reply to TheBefudledEmu [2004-09-07 05:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I really like writing poetry and who cares if it never rhymes.

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TheBefudledEmu In reply to Shadow--Cat [2004-09-07 05:49:41 +0000 UTC]

oh definately. keep it up! actually rhyming poetry always seems very forced to me. its also more difficult to take seriously. witout worrying about rhyme there is room to get that beautiful rhythm that your poetry possesses.

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Shadow--Cat In reply to TheBefudledEmu [2004-09-08 08:46:00 +0000 UTC]

You're so kind.

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