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Published: 2007-08-28 08:38:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 134; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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Description Red in the morning,
Black by night.
Fall little soldier,
You did what's right.

Red in the morning,
Black by night.
Fall little solder,
Out of this fight.

Red in the morning,
Black by night.
Fall little soldier,
Feel the cold's bite.

Red in the morning,
Black by night.
Fall little soldier,
Away from the light.

Red in the morning,
Black in the night.
Fall little soldier,
With a hero's might.
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Comments: 10

EllietheBizarre [2007-10-13 16:43:23 +0000 UTC]

The rhyming works really well, as does the repetition. Go you!! Wonderful!

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Shadow-Of-A-Whisper In reply to EllietheBizarre [2007-10-14 01:17:12 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you, that's very kind,

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Intrinsica [2007-08-28 23:16:36 +0000 UTC]

It's wonderful Nic

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Shadow-Of-A-Whisper In reply to Intrinsica [2007-08-29 06:35:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, you're too nice. Thanks for the fave

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Intrinsica In reply to Shadow-Of-A-Whisper [2007-08-31 04:39:33 +0000 UTC]

I'm not too nice . I"m just nice enough. And you're welcome hun

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merryslambgonewrong [2007-08-28 21:01:08 +0000 UTC]

cool, i love doing that, people who walk by think i'm crazy (cuz i can't sing worth anything)...

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Shadow-Of-A-Whisper In reply to merryslambgonewrong [2007-08-29 06:34:09 +0000 UTC]

I usually don't sing, mainly because I'm so terrible at it. But then again I'm no good at a lot of things, oh well.

Thanks for the fave

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Intrinsica In reply to merryslambgonewrong [2007-08-28 23:16:23 +0000 UTC]

Me either, but I always sing full voice...*blushes* I like singing, it makes me happy, so I don't see why I shouldn't do it!

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merryslambgonewrong In reply to Intrinsica [2007-08-29 02:03:08 +0000 UTC]

thats the best way to be! (i don't sing full voice but i dance like a moron )

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Intrinsica In reply to merryslambgonewrong [2007-08-30 00:01:40 +0000 UTC]

Me too! I dance in public..normally whoever I'm with just pretends they don't know me...A lot of my friends are a bit...normal for me!

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