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Published: 2011-11-11 09:11:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 2892; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 31
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I got bored and I just discovered this, but I did this just for fun. This is Total Magic Pony Island.Combine Survivor with TDI with My Little Pony: FiM.
Links to the fan fic right here: [link]
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INV: (Invisible) Not shown in episode or doesn't talk. NOT good for a winner. (Ex. Denise)
UTR: (Under the Radar): Shown, but just in a group or in the background. Winners have this sometimes, but only once or twice. (Ex. Popper, Ker, Wrecker)
MOR: (Middle-of-Road): They are shown , and placeholders, but no complexity. Or if someone has a combo of OTT and CP. Good for placeholder episodes. (Iris, Luke, Minnie, Phil, Betty, Melanie)
CP: (Complex-Personality): REALLY IMPORTANT for Winners. It shows the person as a 3rd dimension person. You know how they're thinking of. Winners WILL have this mostly. (Skylar, Montana, Vinnie, Baxter, Barney, Marius, Bitsy, Krauss)
OTT: (Over the Top): Simple, 1 dimensional person. Loud, comical, or doing something crazy. Too many of those end up as a distraction. (Craig, Mary, Issac, P. Bear, Maria, Kala, Russell, Johnny)
P = Positive
N = Negative
M = Mixed
1-5 = Visibility.
Since it's just for fun, I'll just show the top contenders. (Our ONLY contenders)
Contenders
Twilight Sparkle: May have not been the star,but maybe it's hidden until the endgame. And has all the connections.
Cheerilee: This was a wild episode for her. However this episode might seal her fate despite her pretty good story arc and balanced ratings...
Trixie: Also meh, but because of the Rainbow vs Cheerilee arc, she'll most likely be like this edit for now
This is basically the only 3 people that actually has a chance to win...as for the others...
The Rest Who Won't Win
Celestia: Irrelevant and no main story arc.
Fluttershy: Too UTR and Irrelevant
Pinkie Pie: Too OTT, but she is the Owen, so maybe....
Rarity: Horrible episodes for her. Mainly N and shown very negative.
Rainbow Dash: Edit's a clusterfuck and a bit too negative.
Scootaloo: Irrelevant in most of the episodes.
Derpy Hooves: Returnee
Vinyl Scratch: Same as Derpy
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Comments: 50
Good edgic. What frustrations me is that this story was on hiatus for a long time. I hope it get going soon.
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I doubt it because of the drama going on between Chimchar and most of deviantart. He ended up blocking half of the deviants including me. OR knows what I'm talking about since last year he cause one batshit insane flame war.
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I see. Well, I understand that.
BTW, I am working on "Total Drama Equestria" with Orange Ratchet and Toonwriter, a crossover of TD and MLP: FIM. If you want to look at them, you can as well as make an edgic on it (I would myself but while I could make one, the INV, UTR, MOR, etc. is something I may have trouble).
Also, I just put up the first episode of Total Cartoon Island (based on Total Drama Island but not the same way of eliminations) if you wanna check it out and do an edgic.
Not forcing or begging, just want to see edgics of my mentioned fics, 'tis all.
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I'll see if I can get to work on it. I'm just busy a lot especially since I'm doing some Co-Hosting duties for a few ORGs and that takes a lot of time for preparation.
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We understand. But whenever you're ready to work on it, to save you some time on Deviantart, here's the link to TDE on a different site, should you be interested: www.fimfiction.net/story/16130…
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Oh, plus, I don't think it really makes that much of a difference, but a few technical things to point out:
1. Sweetie Belle and Vinyl Scratch each have a dark line next to their names, while everyone else's is normal.
2. Gilda and Derpy's gray boxes from their elimination to their return are shown instead of being fused together, like Vinyl's.
3. Are you sure you couldn't just make the name boxes a LITTLE bigger? Seeing Apple Bloom's name as a whole name just bothers me, since a lot of people mistake her name for one name, and it isn't. It's two words. If you don't believe me, go and look at the official page: [link]
Hope this doesn't annoy you. I simply have OCD and I'm a neat freak and a perfectionist. I can't help it. Just wanted to point those things out, should you bother to fix them whenever you feel like it. *hugs*
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1) Yeah, I'll fix that after the next episode.
2) Also my fault. I'll fix that too.
3) I'll lower the size for Apple Bloom's name to make it separate. I always forget it's 2 names.
This is what happens if I update an Edgic at 1:00 in the morning.
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Heh, we all make little technical mistakes. It happens. I hope it didn't annoy you; I just figured that I would point them out.
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Sorry, it was hard for me to find again; you have a lot of stuff in your gallery, and since you didn't update this so that it shows up in submissions and whatnot, I had to go find it. But, I'm here now. So, anyway, as for what you updated, it makes a lot of sense and it looks nice. I really wish I could get under-the-radars out of there, but with somepony like Fluttershy, it's next to impossible. There's just a few things I still don't think I quite understand.
First off, how exactly is Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash each over-the-top? Each one discussed their game strategies, at least I think I did, and Scootaloo showed a completely different side of her that we haven't seen yet. I think I still really struggle to see what makes someone complex and what makes them over-the-top. Also, was Gilda seriously negative? I was hoping she'd get at least a mixed, since her attitude was mostly just sarcastic and rude, but rude in the "nice" way, not rude in the "heartless" way. I don't know.
And...still with Twilight, Cheerilee, and Trixie as your top three contenders, huh? Well, logically, it's hard to argue with that. Easily, those three I've worked on a lot, and made them each have their own unique stories. Each one basically starts and ends at specific points, but you'll see that later. I can't really argue with those three at all. I love all three as well. They're very cute ponies.
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Let me give my explinations for my ratings for Gilda, Scootaloo, and Rainbow.
Gilda was obviously CP, but the way she manipulated Scootaloo in a way that made her start doubting her loyalty gave her the N tone, not the aggressiveness and sadistic personality.
Scootaloo was OTTM was because even though she showed some doubt, she also didn't accept the fact that Rainbow Dash is using her. She's being delusional about trust denying the fact that she's just a pawn to Rainbow Dash and not advancing her story. That's what gave her the OTT. She didn't do anything not even asking Rainbow about the doubt. She didn't even ask Cheerilee, so there wasn't enough complexity from Scootaloo to give her the CPM.
Rainbow was OTTN was because her confessionals were repetitive and she already told us the strategy from last episode. Usually repetitive statements usually leads to OTT ratings. She also got really cocky and was extremely negative towards some of the characters (Gilda, Cheerilee, Scootabuse) that gave her the easy N tone.
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Really? Just doing THAT can get you a negative tone? Even if she was just trying to help out because it was TRUE? Huh, I honestly didn't know that. I guess I know something else now that can be a negative tone.
Hmm...well, in that case...yeah, I suppose I can understand that now. But, not like that can be helped right now; when you basically lead most of your young life loving/idolizing someone, it takes a LOT to break you of that hold. Regardless of what may happen to you in the process. So, yeah, I get it.
Oh. Well, again, I understand now. But, that's Rainbow Dash for you; she does tend to repeat things a lot. Even in the shows she constantly repeats what she says. Thanks for explaining though; you really do know what to look for in these things. I'm always amazed.
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the only thing I would have to say is an issue with this is that your reasoning would work if this was an actual reality show however this is a work of fiction so storytelling is more important than logic or reasoning. However its probably pretty close to the truth.
I'd wouldn't put Cheerilee as a real contender, she's literally a background character and she doesn't have many allies which would mean there's a lot going against her both story-wise and (for lack of a better word) gamesmanship-wise. I'd agree with trixie and Twi they're quite important to the story so I wouldn't be surprised seeing them near the endgame. Dash will no doubt get close to the end but karma most likely will catch up to her. The EoH have a large impact on voting storywise so I'd expect at least 4 of the remaining 5 will at least make it to top 8. I couldn't imagine Fluttershy being voted out over someone like Cheerilee when Celestia and her friends have her back.
I'd like to see who you think are in danger of being voted out next/soon as well. My guess is Gilda and Derpy wont last long. Derpy is a fan favorite but she's irrelevant to the story and Gilda has too many enemies.
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Lovely job, as usual, Shadey! Wasn't expecting this up so fast, but I'm very proud of you, and thrilled to see it. It's so nice seeing Vinyl, Derpy and Gilda back on there. Wow, Gilda didn't get a "negative" for once? Incredible! Other than that, Twi, Trix, and Cheerilee are still your top three girls, eh? Very cute! As always, thank you for doing this, and to further show my appreciation and (hopefully) get you views, I'm gonna post this on my newest blog on FIM-Fiction, alright? Look for it!
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Beautiful edit, my good friend. Ah, it's so lovely to see bright, vibrant colors with the newest episode...even though I'm still really not writing Fluttershy that well and am still earning her an "under the radar". Still, that white background is better than that horrible tan one, or God forbid, that gray "invisible" background. Man, Fluttershy is just REALLY impossible to write in this type of story, you know? But, regardless...nice work! Still have Twi, Trix, and Cheerilee as the three top gals, eh? Very cute picks! But, yeah, to answer your question from FIM-Fiction...episode 14 is gonna be the game-changer, in so many ways! You do NOT want to miss it!
As always, thanks so much for bothering to do this, and thanks for being a loyal reader! Hope you're doing well...uh...hmm, I need a nickname for you. I already call AbsoluteAnonymous CAD (Canadian Author Dude), so since I talk to you a lot...even though you don't really respond to ME that much...I need to give you a nickname, too! *thinks* Hmm...I COULD always just go with Shadow, Knight, or Shadow Knight...but that'd be too easy. Um...Edgic Man? No, cheesy. Uh...Ernest? No, calling someone by their real name is kinda creepy; even I don't really prefer going by my real name that much! Hmm...you have a tattoo on your forehead, I think...oh, screw it. I'll just call you Shadey.
So, thanks for the newest update, Shadey!
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As always, great work, my talented friend. Perfectly reasonable arguments for all the characters that you made, and it's good to see that most of my "under the radars" are going away...but, that's to be expected with less and less characters, thus paving the way for the remaining ones to stand out more. I always love seeing what you have to say with the "contenders", and now the "the rest who won't win". I just don't know why, but this is one of the main reasons that I keep writing; I love seeing what you have to say. It's a thrill! Anyway, nice update, and thanks for reading!
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I know for one, I'm excited to see what's next!
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Good. I'm proud that only two were under-the-radar and couldn't really read their positive/negative/mixed emotions. All the others, as you marked, have emotions and are in the story in some way. Thanks so much for once again updating this and showing the contestants and how they acted in this chapter. Really love it, as always. You want to know something? Seeing these is what honestly motivates me to hurry up and do the next one, since it excites me to see what you have to say. Is that weird?
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I don't know why, but Luna's gloating at the end of this episode was awesome.
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YES! You finally updated! *gives a Fluttershy "yay" for emphasis* So, still Cheerilee, Applejack, Twilight and Trixie as your top four, eh? They're pretty much been your top four since the start. I love your updated stats, completely agree with them, and I'm glad that you're all caught up. I really do love looking at these. Why? I don't know; looking at a created graph that serves no purpose in my real life shouldn't interest me so much. But, hey, it really does! It's cool, it's colorful, it's well thought out, it's a kind gesture of you to do, and it's just really fun! I hope you had a good Christmas, and I hope you have a good New Year, too. Stay tuned for more of TMPI!
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Very nice thoughts! I'd have to say that I agree with all of them, too! Ooh, I don't know why I get so excited when I see these, but I do! So, Trixie, Cheerilee, Applejack and Twilight are your four biggest highlighters right now, eh? Not bad choices...two of the mane six, arguably the most popular one-episode character, and a somewhat-background pony who gets some lines now and then. Nice choices! I'll get to work on the next episode; good luck with your homework and tests! Oh, and as always, nice work on this and thanks for making it!
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I'm not sure if she was CP. She did took a stand when her team was in trouble, but also shown to manipulate Luna, Celestia, and Spike at the challenge.
I'm not sure if it was CP. But I do know Cheerilee and Trixie were hands down CP.
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Hmm...That makes a bit of sense.
I agree with you on that. /= Although, oddly enough, I'm curious as to why Trixie is an N (mind you, I can be tone-deaf).
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The scene after they lost, Trixie basically pulled a Heather manipulating everyone that kept her safe and sending Applebloom home. Think of TDI when Heather got Justin eliminated.
That was clearly an N. (Maybe a M, but that's streaching it....)
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I'm sorry, but I don't see Scootaloo's OTTP in episode one. It seems more M to me.
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Well, her first episode reminded me of Joe in SFC6 where he's being a total fan-mode to Hogan.
Why do you think she's M?
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There was a sentence (Not said by anyone) in there that I can paraphrase to "...she was just rooting for Rainbow Dash to win in whatever fight she got in."
Also, I don't think that Hogan got into any real fights in SFC6. Dash has.
Along that lines, Scoot was rooting for Dash to fight. Joe was just being a fan girl.
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You got a point there.....I'll change it in the next update.
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But, you DO know that there's already four episodes, right? If you add more to this, I'll be sure to take a look. I really do like this!
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I'm already updating Episode 2, so don't worry about it.
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You are? It looks the same as it always does. Well, either way, good luck! I'm excited to see it~
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Updated it all the way to Episode 4. Check it out.
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Oh, but I'm not banned from here. Believe it or not, this is the only place that I'm NOT "Tailslover13". I made an account on here a very long time ago before I loved Tails from the Sonic series, so...this was my name, and since I can't change it, I've kept it like this. So, yeah; that person in your comments isn't me!
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Ignore the rude person above me. This was very nice and very shocking to see. Thanks a lot for doing it! Just for fun or not, you did a cool little job. I love charts and graphs and organizational stuff like that. I have my own table, too, you know:
[link]
Heh, so I made an elimination table, and you made...what was it called? An edgic? I've never actually heard of that, but...pretty cool!
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Oops, I forgot. Stating opinions = rude.
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No, stating opinions is just fine. That's what I did, too; I stated my opinion that your opinion was rude. So, it's the same thing, right?
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But I was just stating my opinion that stating opinions is rude.
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True, but all I'm doing is stating that stating your stating your opinions is rude.
...are we seriously doing this?
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I thought so. But...no hard feelings?
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lol, sure. Not like we're gonna talk to each other outside of this anyways.
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your blatant honesty <3
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Well, it's true, is it not? <3
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ikr. but people are to afraid of confrontation to be direct, that's why I love your comments <3
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Makes it kinda sad when you say it like that, but...you're probably right.
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Don't worry about Coco, he's just being Coco.
Anyways nice chart and I shouldn't have checked it because I got a bit spoiled.
What is an edgic you say? Well, it's a chart which speculates us who will be the winner of the season. You saw part of the edgic info in the description above. But if you're still confused about this, here's the link to the Edgic rules.
[link]
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Okay, if you say so; you know him better than me, after all.
A bit spoiled? Heh, not sure what you mean, but...hey, you're not the only one who knows how to use Excel.
Fair enough; I've looked at some of your other Edgics in your gallery, so I kinda get the idea. *goes to look at your link, though*
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k so this was the lamest fic I've ever read. ^_^
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