mangaka7 [2012-01-18 08:50:01 +0000 UTC]
I like his facial structure here. Compared to your previous works, this is a bit more realistic and organized. Also, it's not geometric.I'm not sure about this but I think his whole body may be too small because of his shoulders. It's hard to tell since this is cropped so I may be wrong.The lines are very clean and the colors are deeper. Try to use even more values so you can add more depth and make your work look more realistic. Keep following those artists, especially `Artgerm (Stanley Lau) because he's the best!The hand unfortunately is still geometric looking. Also, it's too small and thin. For this, you have to use references. Look at your own hands, study the bone structure and do sketches.Keep up the good work!
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ShadowBT In reply to mangaka7 [2012-01-18 14:56:01 +0000 UTC]
Yes I feel as if his body is too small too, even know I think it isn’t by much just a little and I also believe one of the reasons the body might look small is cause of the neck being to thin at least that was what I was told XD..I’ll try adding more values in my next work.I tried looking at my own hand as well as some reference but it was too hard for me to understand the way the hand bended while holding a gun so it ended up in a fail XD and yea now that I look at it it’s to small.I’ll keep practicing structures I’ve done a few but I have to do more XD. Thanks for all of the help .
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