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shadowedfire — My ripple of death

Published: 2005-01-11 02:22:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 122; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 9
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Description I find myself in a white room
No corner or wall is any different than its sisters
No light fixture can be seen
Yet how can I see
Is this a test or more torment

The longer I await in here
The more i notice of this mysterious shade
Not black nor white which i am so accustomed to
Yet it bleeds slowly from the ceiling
To the walls and then stains the floor

This shade begins to bleed from my skin
On my arms and legs
Hands and feet
Save I am used to this

The room continues to fill by this new shade
Slowly inching up my body
I do nothing for what can i do in an enclosed room like so
My last sight is in a corner i did not notice before
A flower covered in the shade
And i can see its beauty
Even being engulfed by its killer

Its already met its death by being submerged by the color
Like I will soon
I examine the flower more
And discover its true colors of blue and green
I see ever so sorry for the flower and weep for it
Its beauty was destroyed by my blood
As if i killed it with my bear hands

My death caused a ripple
And it met the flower
The flower met its ends before me causing me to suffer more
To wish for death sooner
For the blood to finally seep into my lungs and suffocate me

This ripple continues to the walls of the room
And they collapse
My blood seeks more death
And so the ripple continues
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Comments: 9

Pure-Dax [2005-05-09 00:28:29 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE IT

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shadowedfire In reply to Pure-Dax [2005-05-09 01:55:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Funny, I have a friend named Dax.

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InfiniteShadow [2005-03-06 03:54:31 +0000 UTC]

Hey this is pretty good. I can picture the classroom in my mind! Very descriptive.

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shadowedfire In reply to InfiniteShadow [2005-03-06 03:57:21 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot!

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InfiniteShadow In reply to shadowedfire [2005-03-06 03:58:18 +0000 UTC]

Hey no problem. Haven't been on DA in awhile and decided to go artist/poet hunting. I found you!

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shadowedfire In reply to InfiniteShadow [2005-03-06 04:00:49 +0000 UTC]

lol suprised you did, but its cool. Well have fun on your journey.

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Andrea-Raine [2005-01-12 20:38:55 +0000 UTC]

WAHHHO likes it a lots ^_^ and u changed the ending way i suggested ^_^ luvs it very creative a little dark but ack that's most of ur stuff ^_^

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shadowedfire In reply to Andrea-Raine [2005-01-14 19:48:41 +0000 UTC]

dark is all of my stuff, lol thanks

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Andrea-Raine In reply to shadowedfire [2005-01-15 00:16:12 +0000 UTC]

No problem^_^ true true

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