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dra2k4 In reply to ShadowFrost1 [2012-03-22 09:44:39 +0000 UTC]
I caught Dylan and Naluri but I couldn't tell much about the third member. I don't think you mentioned the third person's gender so I found the pronouns a little confusing. I also took the description of colourful bullets literally, you know with a gun, instead of damaku so I didn't figure that one out.
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ShadowFrost1 In reply to dra2k4 [2012-03-22 20:33:40 +0000 UTC]
Alright then. I guess I should start working on the future chapters then.
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RobotEclipse [2012-03-10 03:03:44 +0000 UTC]
I love fighting Zombies.
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ShadowFrost1 In reply to RobotEclipse [2012-03-10 16:14:35 +0000 UTC]
Who doesn't? Especially if you have superpowers or weapons that can easily cause destruction
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