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Published: 2011-06-24 16:26:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 2809; Favourites: 111; Downloads: 31
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Description No Ordinary Sun, by Hone Tuwhare


Tree let your arms fall:
raise them not sharply in supplication
to the bright enhaloed cloud.
Let your arms lack toughness and
resilience for this is no mere axe
to blunt nor fire to smother.

Your sap shall not rise again
to the moon’s pull.
No more incline a deferential head
to the wind’s talk, or stir
to the tickle of coursing rain.

Your former shagginess shall not be
wreathed with the delightful flight
of birds nor shield
nor cool the ardour of unheeding
lovers from the monstrous sun.

Tree let your naked arms fall
nor extend vain entreaties to the radiant ball.
This is no gallant monsoon’s flash,
no dashing trade wind’s blast.
The fading green of your magic
emanations shall not make pure again
these polluted skies . . . for this
is no ordinary sun.

O tree
in the shadowless mountains
the white plains and
the drab sea floor
your end at last is written.


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Vampyre-Lover [2012-01-14 18:13:49 +0000 UTC]

Dynamite Work!!!

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AlexandraRena [2011-10-16 22:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Very good, delicate pencil work!

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moonwolf17 [2011-08-15 09:00:46 +0000 UTC]

this is fantastic

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MirachRavaia [2011-08-14 08:26:00 +0000 UTC]

What a beautiful picture, and what a sad poem...

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shadowgirl In reply to MirachRavaia [2011-08-14 16:49:19 +0000 UTC]

the last 4-5 lines of it I found almost threatening. I do a little writing as well and it kind of spurned an idea a while back for a "prophecy"

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lucidflux [2011-08-09 01:35:13 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely lovely. Your pencil work is so delicate. <3

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vcnielson [2011-07-04 03:20:49 +0000 UTC]

Have I mentioned I am a huge fan of your trees *fangirls all over the trees*

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LindsayPearce [2011-06-28 03:56:11 +0000 UTC]

Really nice! I like the way you shade... cool textures.

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VivalaVida [2011-06-27 18:42:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow, so beautiful.

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skycladarts [2011-06-25 07:56:48 +0000 UTC]

very Charles Vess I have to say...lovely!

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shadowgirl In reply to skycladarts [2011-06-25 11:26:12 +0000 UTC]

Yea, I see that, heh. Damn him for having great art that gets stuck in my head when I work

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skycladarts In reply to shadowgirl [2011-06-25 16:37:58 +0000 UTC]

no problem, he's a great inspiration

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Vermelho [2011-06-24 22:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Really lovely! You're so skilled with a pencil.

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pearwood [2011-06-24 22:02:10 +0000 UTC]

Exquisite, Laura.

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ypyp [2011-06-24 19:16:58 +0000 UTC]

I love the soft pencil work. It is so ethereal.

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mdandree [2011-06-24 17:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Nice! I draw trees with pen & ink on glass & love looking at other peoples works. I love your style.

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shadowgirl In reply to mdandree [2011-06-24 18:54:06 +0000 UTC]

Glass huh? That's something I've never tackled
Thanks!

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mdandree In reply to shadowgirl [2011-06-24 19:03:43 +0000 UTC]

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SeekinaVarasati [2011-06-24 17:38:29 +0000 UTC]

Tjis is why I like you, you know? The ability to be so... natural in your drawings. The way the tree spirit comes to life.

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shadowgirl In reply to SeekinaVarasati [2011-06-24 18:55:36 +0000 UTC]

It's a lot of sitting and having a base idea, then kind of letting it evolve while working and not fighting it Every time I fight it, everything comes out too stiff, like, my original plan for her was her just standing there staring out at us. But, as I worked, I kind of "saw" her hair flowing up into the trunk, and worked from there.

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SeekinaVarasati In reply to shadowgirl [2011-06-25 13:07:28 +0000 UTC]

Yep, I know that effect, with pictures and books, too. Sometimes I also try to control the storyline but it always turns out to be writing itself, no matter what I do with it.

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shadowgirl In reply to SeekinaVarasati [2011-06-25 15:33:07 +0000 UTC]

It's why when I get commissions, the ones that work best are the ones I have most control over and can take the idea and... play with it Comes out less stiff.

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