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ShadowHellfire — Dovahkiin ch4 pg17
Published: 2013-09-02 15:17:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 1467; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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The fight begins. Hey I just realized something super symbolic. The place where they are fighting is the source for the river through Riverwood, where they grew up together. Wow... I'm gonna cry now.Prev:shadowhellfire.deviantart.com/…
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Please, I can SMELL the sexual tension from another reality
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hey i found a manga call 'Amazing Agent Luna' yes it's kinda lame and makes you wanna face palm but ur art reminds me of the adults in it so check it out it may help you with your drawing!!!!! XD
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idk if you meant for it to be said like that but the last panel I think you forgot the word "right"..as in you're "right" about one thing ralof.
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Dang it. Thank you for pointing that out to me. I'll fix it right away.
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I love Dovahkiin but there's so many fight scenes. It does leave me a little confused. I think after this, there should be less fighting and more story. Its taking the focus away from the Dovahkiin and barely got started to show off the main character. The war and personal stuff should be introduced later on once the main character is established, but this is just some constructive criticism for you. Keep it up!
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