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I thought up a couple little comics before I went to bed last night, and this is the only one that I've actually done. I think its funny but I did it so since this is kinnda my first time doing something like this I would love some feedback. I'm not very creative when it comes to thinking up funny little comics involving existing characters but I have done this ONCE before... It was a three or four page comic involving a crossover with "my" characters Ayame and Nesho and Sesshomaru, Sesshy finds a bottle of whipped cream and the two drunken girls think hes rabid. its good but its old and long, I may post it but I haven't decided yet.

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I thought up a couple little comics before I went to bed last night, and this is the only one that I've actually done. I think its funny but I did it so since this is kinnda my first time doing something like this I would love some feedback. I'm not very creative when it comes to thinking up funny little comics involving existing characters but I have done this ONCE before... It was a three or four page comic involving a crossover with "my" characters Ayame and Nesho and Sesshomaru, Sesshy finds a bottle of whipped cream and the two drunken girls think hes rabid. its good but its old and long, I may post it but I haven't decided yet.