Comments: 18
Flame-Bloom [2018-08-02 20:22:42 +0000 UTC]
Tall dark boy!
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Flame-Bloom In reply to ShadowMahBoi [2018-08-02 20:37:01 +0000 UTC]
His backstory is very tragic. :'3 I hope you let him be happy now.
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ShadowMahBoi In reply to Flame-Bloom [2018-08-02 20:40:12 +0000 UTC]
:3c We'll see~
I totally didn't make an AU where Shadow accidentally killed Coffee and now he suffers from unbearable amount of guilt
Me? Neveeeer
(he's actually a happy boi with his family and Coffee)
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ShadowMahBoi In reply to Flame-Bloom [2018-08-02 20:52:55 +0000 UTC]
Actually, if I talk too much about this AU, I'll probably be next to you in that crying corner--
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Flame-Bloom In reply to ShadowMahBoi [2018-08-02 21:08:09 +0000 UTC]
* hugs Shadow while making incomprehensible sad potato noises*
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ShadowMahBoi In reply to Flame-Bloom [2018-08-02 21:17:40 +0000 UTC]
Shadow: Um.. greetings?
this is slowly turning into an rp
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ShadowMahBoi In reply to Flame-Bloom [2018-08-02 21:57:46 +0000 UTC]
I'm totally fine with it uvu
If ya want to rp, we can continue this somewhere else, I just don't like to do this in the comments
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JennyDyn [2018-08-02 18:56:15 +0000 UTC]
Great story! I suggest you add some likes, dislikes and other things though. Also, it kind of looks and feels better if the backstory is the last thing (then again, that might just be me, I don't know), so I suggest moving the last bit before the backstory. Other than that, this is great and I really like his character!
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ShadowMahBoi In reply to JennyDyn [2018-08-02 19:35:51 +0000 UTC]
It's probably my personal preference then, but I like to add fun facts after the backstory, because it could be considered spoiler. Like the smol story about his eye; it would spoil that he got in the lab.
Tbh I never thought about adding likes and dislikes. Idk, I don't feel it necessary. Tho I might add them one day, who knows?
But thank you ^^ You're (ifIremembercorrectly) the first person who gave me some constructive criticism. So special thanks for that~
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Pookadook4 [2017-11-29 00:32:08 +0000 UTC]
Holy dang, that was a cool story!
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Pookadook4 In reply to ShadowMahBoi [2017-11-29 03:28:47 +0000 UTC]
I REALLY LIKE IT
But I feel so bad for him at the same time :C
THAT BOY NEEDS SOME LOVE
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