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Adopted fromName: Blaze
Gender: Female
Age: 2
Personality: She's really really hyper and crazy. She enjoys playing and her faveourite toy is her catnip mousie.
Now, she's gonna be in this story I'm thinking of...
Do you guys like the idea of a bunch of animals who have been geneticlly modified so their colouration is...bright and rainbows and talk human, and all the scientists have disappeared, so they deside to look around?
So far I've got...two cats, a dog, a wolf, and (maybe) a lion.
Any other ideas?
I think I'll make a pidgeon or some sort of bird...a sparrow?
IDK :'D
Design (c) Blob
Everything else now (c) ME!
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Interesting, but I think the idea for the story needs a little bit more thought/fleshing out.
Why are they so brightly coloured?
And talk human? Why so? How is it achieved? (something a little more explanatory than 'genetic modification'). Why did they create these animals? (there would have to be a valid reason, seeing as it sounds like a pretty expensive experiment). And I know it's probably still in the works, but maybe a little more of a plot than 'decide to look around'? And why those animals, instead of the standard rat or guinea pig? (A lion sounds like an awfully risky choice for an experiment; not only are they endangered but are fairly dangerous. Same with the wolf.) Why do they have markings (by looking at Blaze) that are hardly found in their species (I've never seen a cat with a star on it's head).
If you can answer all those questions (I'm not saying now, I'm not saying that you should give me the answers either) and can do so in the story without making it nonsensical and poorly-written, then should you write it.
That is all.
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Yeah, I wasn't really sure about the lion and wolf tbh :'D I think they were random.
And I was only giving a breif symmery =w=; I was asking if people liked the idea of the story before I actually started it...
'dun really think I'll stick to the talking human thing.
And if I told the idea I had on WHY they were brightly, it would spoil my plans for it. >>;
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If someone asked me whether or not I liked the idea of a girl falling in love with a vampire, I would say yes.
However, I still hated Twilight.
I think I should say "Give it more thought before asking the public, so that they have more of an idea of what it's about so they can give a more secure opinion", maybe?
And it's good to see that the colourings are IMPORTANT to the story, and would ruin it if the meaning was revealed; it makes it more significant than just a 'kawaii desu' pointless add-on to the story. In other words, I'm glad you're not making your vampires sparkle just for the hell of it.
Maybe for other animals, the more common rat or mouse? Perhaps a goldfish or canary? You don't need to go exotic or popular with animals to make good, original characters.
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It is important. P:
If you really must know, scientist peoples needed to try something (I keep thinking shampoo, but that's stupid) and so they kidnap (Maybe?) a bunch of random animals and test it, but the product backfires and makes them that colour.
Idk...
...hell yeah, a goldfish. It'd be in a hampster ball like the one in 'My Goldfish is Evil'! XDD
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I never asked you to tell me! *doesn'tlook at the explanation*
As long as you have an explanation that makes sense and fits with the story, that's good enough for me! Dx
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Wow! this is awesome.
awesome idea too, I think it could really work. would it be a fic or a comic?
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Thank you~! :3
Not sure yet. Probably a story...
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You're welcome!~
*reminds me that I actually need to start uploading that story. still sortin stuff out though*
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