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ShadowOfBrokenWings β€” Give In by-nc-nd
Published: 2012-04-14 17:47:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 606; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 3
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Description She falls to the floor, with tears falling from her eyes
Her scars are invisible but they're open wide.
For everyone to see, it's obviously going painfully.
And I'm not sure what to say, 'cause I've never been able to come through…

But I promise you this, in a moment such as this;
That when the fog clears, and the scars begin to fade,
I'll be waiting at the end, 'cause you're a someone no one should miss.
When the tears begin to dry, I hope to see the shine in your eyes

I've run away just like you, scared for all the reasons the world could bare
Fractured under the weight of a thousand suns, I gave in without a bloody care.
While the tears ran down my face, and my scars began to bleed
I knew someone else was in need, for the aid I didn't have.

So I promise you this, in a society as torn as this
That when the world beats you down, and your scars open again
I will be there to help you through, 'cause you're someone no one should miss
When the scars begin to fade, I hope a smile is what I have made.

You're not alone, I am here with you; I'll try as much as this.
The world doesn't seem to get who we are, nor leave us alone
But when the scars of ours forever fade, and the tears no longer show we live in fear
I can honestly say that the end is near, so hold on because I am right here.

Never Give In.
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Comments: 13

ILOVEUHEARTHEART [2012-04-18 22:02:40 +0000 UTC]

OMG this is wonderful...I love it...

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ShadowOfBrokenWings In reply to ILOVEUHEARTHEART [2012-04-19 00:54:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you I appreciate it!

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xlivelovediex [2012-04-15 04:13:03 +0000 UTC]

Basically saved my life, i read this same time i was texting my friend who helped me out of an evil dark place in my life.
THANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH!!

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ShadowOfBrokenWings In reply to xlivelovediex [2012-04-15 16:21:19 +0000 UTC]

I am glad you liked it and i'm glad i helped ^-^ if that first part of your comment was referring to my poem

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Phoenixofdarkness62 [2012-04-15 01:47:24 +0000 UTC]

This... sums up so much of what I, and I'm sure many other need/have gone through. It's beautifully done and just... yeah. It's basically perfect.

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ShadowOfBrokenWings In reply to Phoenixofdarkness62 [2012-04-15 16:20:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you I appreciate your words ^_^

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Phoenixofdarkness62 In reply to ShadowOfBrokenWings [2012-04-15 18:21:29 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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ShadowOfBrokenWings In reply to Phoenixofdarkness62 [2012-04-16 21:37:56 +0000 UTC]

i appreciate it

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AlwaysHoping [2012-04-15 01:36:37 +0000 UTC]

Speechless

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ShadowOfBrokenWings In reply to AlwaysHoping [2012-04-15 16:20:07 +0000 UTC]

awe thanks ^-^

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BurnXlove [2012-04-14 19:33:35 +0000 UTC]

c:
Well if I had to give this a little bit of constructive criticism, it would be that
THIS IS THE BEST THING CREATED BY MAN EVER.

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ShadowOfBrokenWings In reply to BurnXlove [2012-04-14 19:37:54 +0000 UTC]

but you're a woman =w=

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BurnXlove In reply to ShadowOfBrokenWings [2012-04-14 19:44:41 +0000 UTC]

XD
Exactly~!

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