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Published: 2012-09-23 20:28:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 325; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 2
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I can't waitThe emotions stir inside
I don't know why
But i just can't wait
I can't wait to wake up to your smile
This may sound old fashion, cliche
I know we said it'd be awhile
and sweetie, I know it's worth the wait
Sometimes, these feelings well up
and all I want is to hold you tight
But you're not here, you're under starlight
But that's okay, I know our future's bright
How do you describe something you cannot see?
What do you see inside of me?
I see a warming glow inside of you
Underneath your porcelain skinΒ
The hazel in your eyes reflect the warmth of the sun
The softness in your skin is enough to shock and stun
Your heart you've let me hold
The pieces of mine I gave to you...
That you put back together again
I hope there's no such thing as too late
Cause you know I'll be here and waitΒ
The emotions stir inside with just the look from your hazel eyes
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This is quite well written 
There was a mistake in futures which I think should be future's. Other than that it is quite a fine work!
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ah yes i'll fix that 
but of course it can be improved
thanks for the feed back!
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You are welcome and I didn't point out the rhyming scheme to be fixed! That is something I just pointed out to give my perspective. Changing rhyming is hard
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aha woops my bad! thanks again! it is hard to change @_@ once its set in stone changing it, is like making a new poem!
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You are welcome
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it can be, especially for me haha and thanks
ah do you? yeah i might wanna "re-incarnate" my work sometime haha
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I will... since when I look at works of mine that are supposed to be quite good I wonder how I wrote something so very simple and am not impressed by them
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aha sometimes i wonder that too cx but dont worry man
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Ah very true!
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thank you
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you're welcome!
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The sky stirs and great presence,
a great WRONGNESS stirs beyond the veil.
You are eyes flutter and when you can finally control your bowels you notice the tear in the fabric of reality.
A great gray flipper, covered in scars and tooth marks and grac you by the should and in the voice of scraping ivory it says...
"YO WHAT UP FO'SHIZZLE NIZZEL, its been a while, dont even know if you remember little ol'walrus man here. Looks like someones in love, dont you just love biochemistry? It can explain all those feelings your having! But dont think about it too much or it will become horribly depressing. Enjoy what'chu got, yo' a good boy and you write some damn fine poetry. Now I gotta get back to saving some crocodiles badonkadonks from bandits"
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OMG WALRUS! of course i remember you man
oh totally love bio-chem but i wouldnt call it love just yet aha its like inbetween liking someone and loving someone :3 of course i wont think about it too much, it can be depressing, hopefully not this time around
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I've just been painting and what not, got into art class; I was so bored by the end of the first class I drew ANON on the board before I left, just to leave a message, teach him to pawn off bad pasta to me.
As for the song? Surprisingly well, I just have to learn how to sing while I play. Since I am still a novice (only one year under my belt) so I'm using what I know; which are the basic cords that make up almost every song and the intro to "Every Rose has its Thorn" (Apparently, wemenz love that song)
What have I been up to? Well I moved to a new (old) house, got dumped, became sleep deprived; I mean real dark circles under my eyes all the works, and I have to get a medical checkup as I am noticing a few things that are a little off. Its good to talk to people and since I dont care who reads this I can.
As for love,
its a nice thing; Teenagers like us (15-19) fall in love quickly due to our hormones; not to discourage you, Grim seems to be a real nice girl* , so you keep on writin' dat poetry; we need more poets, lots of good writers, few good poets.
*(YES WE KNOW, WE ALL KNOW here a quote: "Everything two lovers do instantly becomes a spectacle, no matter how small the action" I have no idea who said that; WHATCHA GON DO ABOUT IT BRO?)
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yay for painting! But LOL XD
only a year under your belt? thats not too bad i got no years! but thats good its going well
how's the house? ouch that sucks D: man! what kind of little things?
I'm not in love with Grim...yet XD but yes i do agree with your statement when it comes to love! i will keep writing 
LOL great Quote gray
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Painting models that is, which is a skill of its own; needless to say I am a real wiz with a scalpel and cutting things from old kits to create new models. I like to think of it as an art form of its own (Since each model took me about an hour to find all the parts, cut them, re-sculpt any destroyed details). Keep em' on my desk beside the computer, due to my sloth they get painted very slowly, but surely.
Speaking of inspiration I need to finally get it in me to create a finished work, as I consider nothing I have done so far to really be 'done' (That, and Krosata never shuts up about it, ever met him on DA?).
Welp, the house is freezing, even though the heating is great, SOME people think its a good idea to leave all the windows open when everything outside frosts over. Little things? Oh where to begin... I wont bore you with this, lets just say that Gray has never really been a healthy young man.
Glad to know that I at least contribute something to the DA community, but just keep in mind that I THINK, I may have gotten that from a fanfic I read three years ago. Damn good fanfic, lots of cat secks, but damn good.
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aha well man, i havent heard the quote before so its all the same to me !
Ah really? oh no D: and that sucks! i love cold weather though but thats not a good idea at all!
ohh really? cant wait to see :3 actually no i havent met him on dA Grims only talked about him a few times to me
hmm sculpting is great
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One of these days I will.
Preferably when I finish painting them and get a new scalpel; using the same tool for for a while makes Gray a dull boy.
Go talk to him, right now.
People enjoy talking to him, and if you haven't guessed, he and I are bros fo' life.
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sounds like a plan
alright alright i'll talk to him soon enough :3
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Aight, if need be, shine the Walrus flare.
GRAYWALRUS OUT!
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I heard he left dA from Grimm @_@
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Yeah,
guy needed to get somethings in order.
Just hope he sticks with it this time, I think he's gonna be back by November.14th
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oh i see! why the 14th>
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Guy has to get some stuff in order;
internet just leads to procrastination.
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thats very true so very true O_O
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Why thank you Gangsta Gray, I am a real nice girl. Hur hur.
That is a rape face, in case you did not know.
And you're not well? VHAT? Vhy?! You have vorried me now.
Also I seem to recall having a conversation between us back when I still thought you were 32 about teenage love...yah. We are fools who fall to quick, caught in an event that is perhaps just a dream, but a good dream none the less. Love still leaves me skeptical but...I'd try for the right reasons.
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I wanna know what love is Grim,
and I want you to show me.
Well, gray is a bit of hypochondriac; that and he is constantly fatigued, always falling asleep in Science, had the quite the dramatic awakening; books on the floor, all made worse by having A CERTAIN MALE SPECIFIC AFFLICTION AT THE TIME. So I sat down silently, oh that and the Walrus-man is worried about cancer; that would suck, fifteen year old with cancer. Prolly nothing, but you can never be too careful.
Dam stri3ght sista'
yo speakin' true home skittle biscuit.
Just enjoy it for the sake of enjoying it. "Dont sweat the petty things and dont pet the sweaty things" I have no idea who said that bra, but its inspirational.
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You...want me to show you what love? Uhm...
?
In complete honesty...I don't think there is a love that lasts forever. Though everyone wants it. It'd be the best find if it you did. But this [link] really bummed me out there....
*adds hypochondriac to vocabulary* And shit you are worried about cancer too? As am I...going for a check up soon. Hopefully we are just paranoid Gray, don't want to see(figuratively speaking of course)you sick!
And hewl yss its inspirationAL my home walrus.
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Last forever?
Hellz naw, but the human lifespan? Hella yes dawg, just gotta keep the spark. Be spontaneous (Thats just my answer, not from experience)
Welp, the walrus-man has a history of chronic headaches and he has fainted a few times, so just now, he has decided that maybe a check-up wouldn't be that bad.
Dayum girl! Lets go stick it to dem` west SIEEEEE punks.
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"You are eyes flutter"?
I hate myself...
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A reason, no, no I have no reason 
Those hearts were discreet...
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oh sure no reason at all XD Of course they were discreet just like this one ---> [ya know if you never showed me that emote i would never have used it for the sheer fact i didnt know it existed until you introduced me to it XD]
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Nope nope, none at all, this is me not liking it(and you too, I SUPPOSE) *master of emotes*
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mhmmm XD oh yueah tards in love eh? XD
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heehee are we tards? xD
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Well I dunno about you, but I feel a little tardish myself xD
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aweeee its okay XD
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