TheAngstyPoet [2012-02-18 00:57:16 +0000 UTC]
I really like how the first and third rhyme instead of the second and fourth because at the end of each stanza the thought really sticks in your head. <------[crazy run- on] Wonderful
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ShadowOfBrokenWings In reply to TheAngstyPoet [2012-02-18 16:11:31 +0000 UTC]
thank you glad it sticks out ^_^
TheAngstyPoet In reply to ShadowOfBrokenWings [2012-02-19 03:27:11 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome :3
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senna24 [2012-01-29 17:55:46 +0000 UTC]
Wow! That's sooo beautiful!!! Amazing job!
ShadowOfBrokenWings In reply to senna24 [2012-01-29 18:00:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you I appreciate it
senna24 In reply to ShadowOfBrokenWings [2012-01-29 18:04:01 +0000 UTC]
Anytime! I think I'm going to have to watch you now!
ShadowOfBrokenWings In reply to senna24 [2012-01-29 18:08:44 +0000 UTC]
haha alright then, thank you