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Published: 2006-09-25 00:18:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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Description Blood pouring out.
Tears flowing out of my eyes.
I lay like a broken doll.
My eyes show no emotion as of my face.
Everything feels numb.
I can't feel anymore.
I'm broken.
I've no will power.
I've nothing to live for.
No dreams.
Not even a purpose...

help me....are you even there?
you said you'd always be there for me?
you promised me you'd come if I needed you.
you told me you loved me...you'd protect me.
now where are you?
my savior...my love...where are you now?

Break me down
Tear me away
Destroy me piece by piece
Rip me limb from limp
Just do whatever it takes to kill me
I don't care how painful it is
Cuz it won't be as painful like when my heart broke...
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Comments: 17

nicaranime [2006-09-26 08:41:54 +0000 UTC]

good job ^^

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ShadowRaindrop In reply to nicaranime [2006-09-26 23:20:28 +0000 UTC]

sankyu ^^

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nicaranime In reply to ShadowRaindrop [2006-09-27 04:15:53 +0000 UTC]

np

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ErdaErzsebet [2006-09-25 05:32:38 +0000 UTC]

nice poem, the emotion heartbroken really gets through the whole poem and not disturbing or anything.

I love doing rpg's LD

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ShadowRaindrop In reply to ErdaErzsebet [2006-09-26 23:13:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^^

i rp alot. a little too much actually....

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ErdaErzsebet In reply to ShadowRaindrop [2006-09-27 07:49:00 +0000 UTC]

ah welcome to the club me too ^^

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ShadowRaindrop In reply to ErdaErzsebet [2006-09-27 23:39:49 +0000 UTC]

^^

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ErdaErzsebet In reply to ShadowRaindrop [2006-09-29 16:59:44 +0000 UTC]

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ShadowRaindrop In reply to ErdaErzsebet [2006-09-29 19:40:44 +0000 UTC]

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ErdaErzsebet In reply to ShadowRaindrop [2006-09-29 21:59:37 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Dragon-child-Hehi [2006-09-25 01:40:18 +0000 UTC]

i liked it and as for spelling well its better than mine at any rate

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ShadowRaindrop In reply to Dragon-child-Hehi [2006-09-26 23:11:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Dragon-child-Hehi In reply to ShadowRaindrop [2006-10-12 16:34:14 +0000 UTC]

no probe

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MechanicalMayhem [2006-09-25 01:30:02 +0000 UTC]

Deep. Deep and painful. Love is a diffacult and often misplaced but when it's torn away it still hurts. But the odd thing is that love has an astounding abillity of coming back. Maybe very soon maybe in a few months/years/decades. Maybe from the same person, maybe from a new one. But it always comes back whenever it leaves. So it never really goes away, just takes a vacation from you. It will return, in the same form or not it will return. Until then be patient with open arms. You can do it, I have faith in you.

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ShadowRaindrop In reply to MechanicalMayhem [2006-09-26 23:10:33 +0000 UTC]

thanks Mayhem....I'll take it to heart ^^

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IncandesentNeko [2006-09-25 00:40:38 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, this is a bit different from your usual style, but nonetheless is unmistakeably yours.

There are a few spelling mistakes, but it's still beautiful.

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ShadowRaindrop In reply to IncandesentNeko [2006-09-25 00:57:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks. i know i made some errors, but i felt lazy to fix 'em

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