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rvrvreeaawe [2013-01-25 21:50:19 +0000 UTC]
Not a bad story. Just work on some grammatical and mechanical errors and you'll be golden!
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ShadowRaven1 In reply to rvrvreeaawe [2013-01-25 22:05:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Would you mind pointing out the errors to me so that I may fix them?
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MorganFireStables [2013-01-25 03:24:19 +0000 UTC]
wow that is a very haunting pic!
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alexpeanut [2013-01-24 15:17:28 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE the animation but sskdjgsh the story is so sad ;-;
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Zandromina [2013-01-24 04:18:33 +0000 UTC]
Babyyyyy D: *cuddles her warm*
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Zandromina In reply to ShadowRaven1 [2013-01-24 04:26:38 +0000 UTC]
Bad Momma. Bad. *blankies Fawn and cuddles*
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ShadowRaven1 In reply to Zandromina [2013-01-24 17:09:24 +0000 UTC]
She must be protected at all costs!
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Zandromina In reply to ShadowRaven1 [2013-01-24 17:10:04 +0000 UTC]
Yes! Precious babehs must be protected
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Zandromina In reply to ShadowRaven1 [2013-01-24 17:23:15 +0000 UTC]
Shadow! I swear, I must send Leif out there to protect this poor baby lol
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ShadowRaven1 In reply to Zandromina [2013-01-24 17:50:24 +0000 UTC]
XD If it makes you feel any better she's going to have a large giant protector once at MLS.
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Zandromina In reply to ShadowRaven1 [2013-01-24 17:51:34 +0000 UTC]
Oh good. No more getting lost in the snow or woods. Will it be one of the imports you bring in that just, for whatever reason, takes a liking to her? Or will it be the new chestnut you bought from someone?
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Zandromina In reply to ShadowRaven1 [2013-01-24 17:58:31 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, I see. That should make for an interesting story, especially if you incorperate the chestnut's history into it as well
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ShadowRaven1 In reply to Zandromina [2013-01-24 18:07:02 +0000 UTC]
O.o is there more to his history than I've been able to find?
He was originally given to Arly as a foal and has been there since right? I did my best to find out more about him but there's sadly not a lot.
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Zandromina In reply to ShadowRaven1 [2013-01-24 18:09:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh I have no clue. Sorry, I meant Arly's stories of him, not actual history like the abandoned art auction ones have
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Zandromina In reply to ShadowRaven1 [2013-01-24 18:16:25 +0000 UTC]
Ah, okay. I'm excited to see either way, honestly. You have made a very good story for Fawn so far! Though it is sad
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Zandromina In reply to ShadowRaven1 [2013-01-24 18:19:04 +0000 UTC]
True enough! We will do everything we can to protect the little baby, though x3
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ShadowRaven1 In reply to Zandromina [2013-01-24 18:22:03 +0000 UTC]
Yes xD now she shall be protected and cherished.
And just think, I almost held off on posting this one and creating one of her running terrified through the forest.
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ShadowRaven1 In reply to Zandromina [2013-01-24 18:46:40 +0000 UTC]
XD It's not really with-holding as I'm sure you could have guessed that it already happened. Seriously the text would have been short and along the lines of "Fawn ran blindly through the trees, branches scrapping across her face and chest. It was so cold."
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