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Published: 2007-09-01 08:21:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 120; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description I want to sin, I want to sin
I want to taste your grace
I want your skin, I want your skin
Over which I'll trace
I want the nerves, I want the nerves
Underneath that lace

So set me free to be the one you need
Let me hear you breathing down on me
It's not a mistake to want to taste you
I want to feel every inch like I never will again
So wont you - just hold me
I want to - stifle my screams
I need you - ontop of me
So won't you - baby, please

I want to sin, I want to sin
I want to bite that lace
I want your skin, I want your skin
To submerge my faith
I feel the nerves, I feel the nerves
The fire that you make

So burn me baby, the flame doesn't hurt a bit
No other score could ever distract me from it
I love you more than you could imagine
Now give me the chance to prove it
So won't you - just hold me
I want to - stifle my screams
I need you - ontop of me
So won't you - crawl on me

I want to sin, I want to sin
Want to remove that lace
I want your skin, I want your skin
I need it's unique taste
Nerves intertwined, don't dare unwind
Together, we're displaced



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Comments: 5

Darkdream-eth [2007-09-12 16:11:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Really good XDDD As usual. Seems like something I never though you'd write though, lol. But I still like it! I still envy you! XDDD

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ShadowSpire In reply to Darkdream-eth [2007-09-12 19:00:05 +0000 UTC]

You envy me? Never thought I'd hear that from anyone! And thanks for the comment

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Darkdream-eth In reply to ShadowSpire [2007-09-13 00:39:14 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome for the comment. As for the envying thing....


YES!!!!! I TOTALLY AND COMPLETELY ENVY YOU!!!! If I could write like you, it would be so awesome, but half the time I keep coming up with this dumb rhyming crap. Well, YOUR rhyming is good but mine is just terrible!!!

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ShadowSpire In reply to Darkdream-eth [2007-09-15 04:00:41 +0000 UTC]

Lol well I honestly trhink what I write is crap really, but thank you Hey maybe you should post your stuff? I'm sure your rhyme scheme is fine, who knows you might even have a few people start watching you That's what happened to me afterall. I dunno why they do... lol

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Darkdream-eth In reply to ShadowSpire [2007-09-18 00:40:18 +0000 UTC]

I think that all writers or artists think their stuff is crap, really. I mean, it seems that most people are never satisifed with their work. Actually I meant to put more poems on here, but I only actually ever put two and I don't even know if they'd be considered poems. They were my 1st two deviations. The first one I did was 'Breathe' and that one is the extra rhymy one, then there's 'Stor' and I just did that randomly.....That one doesn't ryhme at all, I think.

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