banky [2002-11-15 02:37:35 +0000 UTC]
Ooo. I'm always impressed by a comic page layout, especially one with seductive means. Oo la la. Hmm, what to critique, can't find anything to say really. I'm kind of confused by the middle scene and the marks on her cheeks. (I didn't zoom in to read words however). And I'm assuming by early page you mean its not finished or that you just posted it early? Again the middle frame looks like she is missing some hair.
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