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Published: 2008-11-29 20:54:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 143; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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The secret Lay thereBlood ran from her hands
Still feeling misery scare
As I want to speak im
Start to chock in
Donβt say goodbye this time
Cause I didn't finished my dream
I keep failing
Without knowing
When you're saving need to be
Like a stroll
I'll look straight
When you where the cause after all
No thinking at past
Said my way will choose my destiny
Afterlife made me last
Know my love eventually
I'll spare my days in guidance
True bleeding eyes I see
You're an angel of grace
To love you was the desire of me
Won't let this fire extinguish from me
Life gave me a reason to this accidentally
Tag around me and won't let go just perceive
That for you my heart is the only thing to give
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Comments: 2
It feels like you keep flying from one scene to another, with the same idea, but it's still driving the reader nuts.
You really need an editor for your works, someone or a program to fix you or something.
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thx for the comment I'll take your advice thx :]
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