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SharonAgathon — Chastity - awakening in the sewers

Published: 2020-01-14 13:43:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 1046; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 0
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( I tried to recreate an old comic cover but the story is more for my own RPG Character whose appearance only is based on the old chaos comic character )


While she was going to investigate a poosible demonic infestation down in the sewers she got surprised and knocked out.
When she awake she found herself chained in a dark place just lightened by some candles. Yet she smiled as her enemies may have gotten her once, but they won´t

get her twice. Silently she is calculating her options. Just casting a spell and simply breaking the chains or should she wait a little longer, maybe she will find out what all this is about.

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Comments: 3

weyrwoman-lessa [2020-01-14 14:19:35 +0000 UTC]

Nice use of depth in this piece!

From my end, there are only 3 things I have remarks about:

- since she's in the sewers and those are not particularly clean, she and her chains should perhaps be more dirty. If you need a few-click-option, take a look at "SurfaceWorX" over at DAZ; else, you could try add a grimey glossiness map to the chain.

- The bloom effect is too strong for my taste; better tone it down a little.

- is the repetitive shader in the corridor intentional or would you rather use another stone shader?

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SharonAgathon In reply to weyrwoman-lessa [2020-01-14 14:48:39 +0000 UTC]

Thx for the feedback.

Now to your points :

I thought about that too, and i may make a reworked picture and make her more dirty .... or maybe she used a cleaning spell on herself ( a woman always has to shine )
I like the lighting as it is, but i will see how it would be with less bloom.

The corridor is made out of Gateways ( Torbögen ). It was the best way i could come up with a convincing corridor

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weyrwoman-lessa In reply to SharonAgathon [2020-01-17 15:06:05 +0000 UTC]

Take a look at my Geometry Editor Tut on Youtube, then you can make a cylinder or a cube a tube www.youtube.com/watch?v=aMv_yF…

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