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Published: 2015-05-06 08:53:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 18245; Favourites: 233; Downloads: 0
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So, it's been a calendar year since I opened this little page... and, was able to have a lot of interesting conversations and draw a lot of interesting stuff - the various commissioners have also helped my life immensely, so a thank you to everyone who'd visited!I try to get better at something everytime I pick up my pen and start a new page, and looking back I'm glad to see how horrible I was in some aspects...
As it happens, Robot Girls Z+ airs later this month, so it seemed appropriate that I pick up my first deviation here and do a critique of my 2014 self. Β Enjoy the result!
So, if you're an artist, I hope you have the same attitude towards your own work, and if not, thanks for the support over the last year!
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Freakishly annoying and long. I mean the under remake part.
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That first picture was hot enough then you crank it up five notches.
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LOL, the commentary on the middle segment got a good laugh out of me, especially since I frequently use "abomination" when referring to segments of my stuff back when I used to draw haha.
I will say that your style has come a long way since then; you've gotten a lot more... explorative (is that a word??) with posing which is good, and have gotten better with colouring (BY FAR) and anatomy for sure. Probably a sign that you're waaaay more comfortable with your art than before probably due to the experience(if that makes sense).
Not to sound creepy, as I may have only been vocal recently on here but I've been lurking on your page a while now and I gotta say you've quickly become like my favourite DiD artist. Grats on getting many fans in just one year with this page xD
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Really appreciate your support! I'm sure other artists you watchΒ would enjoy your comments as well~ and probably reply more diligently than myself
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I really like the new updated/redrawn one over the original. I'm always a sucker for seeing how people have improved over time and boy have you ever.
If I had to say anything about why I like the newer picture is the expression on her face. I know many want a gag but with one you wouldn't get that good of a look on her face as that robotic hand get's closer haha.Β
Can't wait to see what next you do here on DA but knowing you it will be great. Also it is always nice to see artist go back over works and improve on things they notice. It shows that they really want to improve at what they do. Keep up the great work!
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Dont mean to hurt you or discourage you, but I like the original better.
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and here i thought it looked perfect when you first posted the photo 1 year ago. you even improved more xD
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Your critiques are interesting and informative as always even when they're on your own work
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Congratulations on your first year! I remember seeing this picture and was like: wow another awesome DiD artist! Wonder if he does commissions!Β
Little do I know you'd be one of the top artist in my list I would love to get a commission from.
Here's to more years then of improvement and amazing work! Best of luck to you!Β
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I remember mecha girl with glasses...
But yeah! Congrats for one year on the DA!
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I didn't think it was bad at all! In fact, I like the old version more cuz of the gag :3 But the remake is good too
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think most artist are, I cant stand my sketch book from my studio classes, the horror, the horror
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Congratulations man! a whole year already. And quite an improvement too.
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Great job... Congratulations on your 1st anniversary here in DeviantArt
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I see what you're talkin about, the gag is the cherry but the body the strawberry split. Still, you did an awesome job considering the picture. :wink:
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The lack of gag makes me question its status as an improvement.
Looks good otherwise, though!
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