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Published: 2008-05-02 20:58:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 2134; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 32
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Description Okay, page three. I'll make this straight to the point...

This is Shonen ai. Deal. You don't like akuroku, gtfo cuz I don't wanna hear it.

This comic is right to left, Japanese style and the panels are numbered for your convenience. Once more, this is page THREE.

Page one: [link]
Page two: [link]


I have not started on page four but I will. I tried a new style, my first time inking so gimme a break. Tell me if you like it or you have any suggestions. Should I keep the ink or go back to the old style? Toning or something? Throw me a bone.

I really hate panels 5 and 7 and I'm not pleased at all, but I do think my art is improving. This took several hours more than I'm willing to count... A week of working through math class to finish it... because I tooootally pay attention in class. I swear...

Please enjoy. Comments, feed back, and constructive critisism are all greatly appreciated. Tell me what you want in the next page cuz I have NO plans...

Sorry about the moodiness. Rough week.
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Comments: 35

Kilala-Rossi-Paris [2019-02-27 03:29:58 +0000 UTC]

will there be sora and roxas in this ?

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WaterdragonWave [2012-07-25 14:15:44 +0000 UTC]

more page? o_O

maybe Axel kiss Roxas on the next page?

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rebecca9965 [2012-01-14 20:48:45 +0000 UTC]

lol at the 9th box i was like its axel got it memorized? ^_^

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hiramiInuzuka [2011-05-12 04:51:36 +0000 UTC]

Please continue...

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schatzi333221 [2010-12-31 08:13:28 +0000 UTC]

Are.... are you ever going to continue this? @w@

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Oilux [2010-01-01 08:52:57 +0000 UTC]

i love it!!!!!!!!!!
u gotta continue i gotta know what happens!!!!!!!!!

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Sarahostervig [2009-12-31 15:25:42 +0000 UTC]

I hope you're soon gonna go on with the comic^^

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DisneyStar12 [2009-06-10 04:13:14 +0000 UTC]

MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!! Please continue.

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DisneyStar12 [2009-04-19 22:23:35 +0000 UTC]

Pleeeeaaase make another page. I must find out what happens.

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Sora-X-Roxas-X-Me [2008-09-10 16:17:08 +0000 UTC]

Hehe What's Shonen ai? is it like yaoi onl differet...? O_O Oh well good job!

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shattered-destiny In reply to Sora-X-Roxas-X-Me [2008-09-10 20:47:08 +0000 UTC]

Same thing, sweetheart.
Thanks

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Sora-X-Roxas-X-Me In reply to shattered-destiny [2008-09-11 07:30:08 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh Okaii Thnx! So why is it called differently? Is it JUST the name idfferent or is Yaoi like proper sex and that ai thing just kissing and stuffs?

*Sigh* I'm confuzzled...TT_TT
lol
Shannon..x

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shattered-destiny In reply to Sora-X-Roxas-X-Me [2008-09-12 00:02:46 +0000 UTC]

um... why don't you just look up the definitions, hun?

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Sora-X-Roxas-X-Me In reply to shattered-destiny [2008-09-12 15:47:57 +0000 UTC]

I'll google it lol or looki t up in the dictonary...wait, its a japanese word...dictionary wount help there then...-_-'''

To The Google! *points to Google and floats off*
Shannon..x Lol

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bloodyblackvalentine In reply to Sora-X-Roxas-X-Me [2009-01-04 11:30:18 +0000 UTC]

Yaoi means the hardcord stuff, the actual guy on guy sex. Shonen-ai is everything before that, most people mix the meanings so most things are simply called yaoi if it anything boy boy implied.

I person gave up long ago calling all the lighter stuff shonen-ai sadly because lots of people didn't know this bit of information either.

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manana-mint [2008-08-26 20:38:19 +0000 UTC]

i want the next one!! so good!

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shattered-destiny In reply to manana-mint [2008-08-26 23:20:39 +0000 UTC]

XD Thanks hun! still trying to think of what happens next.

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blackxxxkeyblade [2008-07-27 21:33:44 +0000 UTC]

Hi =] I really love this like, to pieces lol

but I have to say i really did like your art when you used pencil, it sorta set the dark scene for me, it also showed your artistic skills so much better

so yahh haha, keep up the good work, cuz it really is good work

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shattered-destiny In reply to blackxxxkeyblade [2008-07-29 01:49:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'll take that into consideration and perhaps do more in pencil as soon as I resume work on this comic.

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gabrielsangel [2008-05-26 06:52:06 +0000 UTC]

OH PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!!!! IT IS SOOOO GOOD!

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shattered-destiny In reply to gabrielsangel [2008-05-27 19:08:43 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thanks! Will do as soon as I get an idea

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gabrielsangel In reply to shattered-destiny [2008-05-28 01:52:26 +0000 UTC]

I do have a couple of ideas... if you like any of them, please feel free to use them!

1. Axel moves in to Kiss Roxas, Roxas breaks away and starts to run, Axel traps him, some how knocks him out, Roxas wakes up in a bed (with clothes on (Sorry all fan girls reading, not yet ) and finds Axel in the kitchen cooking. He is confused, but Axel goes on to explain their past and asks why Roxas never came back. Roxas can only remember becoming his own person when he and Sora chose to become their own person somehow (haven't thought of that yet) but Axel is desperate to make him remember.

2. Roxas gets away from Axel, but Axel continues to stalk him, only to discover what happened to Roxas after he left the organization and Sora. A Little more on the sad side.

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shattered-destiny In reply to gabrielsangel [2008-06-18 23:46:23 +0000 UTC]

Oooh I like number 2, I might use it. Thank you so much for the suggestions. It really helps! If you have any more feel free to tell me.

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gabrielsangel In reply to shattered-destiny [2008-06-19 00:20:20 +0000 UTC]

It's all yours! Glad I could help!

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Zaria-Aleris [2008-05-04 22:14:16 +0000 UTC]

Heh this is going to be awesome. Art work is so pretty ^^ Can't wait for more.

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shattered-destiny In reply to Zaria-Aleris [2008-06-13 23:16:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks~ You should help meh write it! I need someone with mad author skills like you.

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Zaria-Aleris In reply to shattered-destiny [2008-06-17 21:17:41 +0000 UTC]

Awwwz! You're making me blush -wiggles and pounces- I don't mind helping j00 though -nuzzles-

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shattered-destiny In reply to Zaria-Aleris [2008-07-23 14:28:14 +0000 UTC]

>:3 I try~
Thankies!

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xPookiex [2008-05-02 22:18:10 +0000 UTC]

Fuuuu~ don't hurt poor Roxas. ;u; -claws at computer screen-
Also, the way you colored Axel's cloak is like... o.o Wow.

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shattered-destiny In reply to xPookiex [2008-05-02 23:06:02 +0000 UTC]

You like? I should keep inking then?

>3 and I know you secretly want him hurt

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xPookiex In reply to shattered-destiny [2008-05-03 01:05:01 +0000 UTC]

Keep inking if you want. ^__^ It looks fantastic.
And uh... maybe... >>

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shattered-destiny In reply to xPookiex [2008-06-13 23:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Lol thanks hun, will do!
And you know its true~

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NarutoxSasukeLover [2008-05-02 21:10:30 +0000 UTC]

wuts he doing to him? :B

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shattered-destiny In reply to NarutoxSasukeLover [2008-05-02 22:09:34 +0000 UTC]

I haven't decided yet

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NarutoxSasukeLover In reply to shattered-destiny [2008-05-03 03:49:24 +0000 UTC]

kk lol i guess i'll have to wait and see 8D

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