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Shattered-Faith — Puppet Series 3
Published: 2006-02-13 04:40:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 170; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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a colab with the lovely ~UniqueDesire Thanks for being my model Sami.....Much more of this series to come folks!!Related content
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This is the strongest picture from that shoot in terms of composition in angle and pose as well as impact, I think.
I feel like this was somthing like a sketch for a truely great artistic shoot.
You should re-do these with a more thought-out background to add dimention to the "story" of the image[doesn't need to be in focus, of course] and also back up from the model a bit so that you can crop it later to have more space at the top[would add more of a sence of looking up from the floor and ground the figure in the bottom 3rd of the image].
Don't take that as any negative critism. I feel that you could potentially have a really strong potfolio piece here, and I also think you could really make some powerful art-photography if given a studio and some time to work shit out.
You have talent.
If you didn't, I wouldn't have bothered to leave this comment.
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