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ShayHart — My Mystery Girl- Alternate Ending

Published: 2012-08-21 01:27:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 524; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 12
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Description Yep! Here it is!
You've been waiting for it!

This is the alternate ending of 'My Mystery Girl'. I personally like the original better because it's more suspenseful and depressing....I just can't write happy endings!

Anyways, here it is (: I hope you like it!



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Comments: 32

Dragonprincess724 [2014-03-07 22:31:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for adding the alternate ending. I go from bawling my eyes out to smiling uncontrollably. Congrats. Your fan fic is the only one that has made me cry. I think that's a good thing though.

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dzozoe521 [2013-05-15 02:54:21 +0000 UTC]

is this what would happen if they didn't die?

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ShayHart In reply to dzozoe521 [2013-05-19 01:29:49 +0000 UTC]

Yes :3

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dzozoe521 [2013-05-13 13:13:30 +0000 UTC]

which one is the other one?

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kiki531 [2012-10-12 00:35:26 +0000 UTC]

Personally I prefer this ending. you are an incredible writer but I prefer the happy endings!

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ShayHart In reply to kiki531 [2012-10-12 00:59:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! That means a lot to me!

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kiki531 In reply to ShayHart [2012-10-12 01:08:42 +0000 UTC]

no problem! I am a HUGE Directioner and I have lately been obsessed with fanfics I really wanna go to their concerts, but they are so expensive!

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ShayHart In reply to kiki531 [2012-10-12 01:14:37 +0000 UTC]

I do too! I was super close to being able to go to one.

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kiki531 In reply to ShayHart [2012-10-12 01:19:56 +0000 UTC]

how? were you going to buy a ticket?

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ShayHart In reply to kiki531 [2012-10-12 01:32:25 +0000 UTC]

Me mum was for me birthday...but they sold out before she could

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kiki531 In reply to ShayHart [2012-10-12 19:23:31 +0000 UTC]

awww....that sucks D: My birthday's coming up but they are sold out!

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ShayHart In reply to kiki531 [2012-10-12 19:37:42 +0000 UTC]

Aw ):

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kiki531 In reply to ShayHart [2012-10-12 19:39:09 +0000 UTC]

ikr

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BrandyWolf [2012-09-12 23:02:02 +0000 UTC]

Haha > Happiness is me <3 I swear. Your amazing <333

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ShayHart In reply to BrandyWolf [2012-09-12 23:02:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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BrandyWolf In reply to ShayHart [2012-09-12 23:04:17 +0000 UTC]

Np. Its true <3

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Ithinkurqreat [2012-08-26 02:43:26 +0000 UTC]

Fangirling because Stole My Heart is playing on my iphone <3

This is the most adorable ending ever!

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ShayHart In reply to Ithinkurqreat [2012-08-26 19:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Ithinkurqreat In reply to ShayHart [2012-08-27 06:16:02 +0000 UTC]

You're a 100% welcome.

Likely the best fanfic I've ever read!

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ShayHart In reply to Ithinkurqreat [2012-08-27 19:45:21 +0000 UTC]

that means so much to me!

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Swifttail246 [2012-08-21 22:01:06 +0000 UTC]

ME AND HARRY HAVE A CHILD Lol great ending tho :'''D

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ShayHart In reply to Swifttail246 [2012-08-21 22:31:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks (:

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32bees [2012-08-21 03:19:06 +0000 UTC]

It's so so so so so so so good! Both endings were flacking AWESOME, but I'm a sucker for happy ones xD Amazing job, Shay, as always

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ShayHart In reply to 32bees [2012-08-21 03:20:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Jen!

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32bees In reply to ShayHart [2012-08-21 03:22:15 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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NarwhalsvsUnicorns [2012-08-21 01:53:48 +0000 UTC]

really good but i agree with you i like the more depressing stuff lol.

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ShayHart In reply to NarwhalsvsUnicorns [2012-08-21 02:33:58 +0000 UTC]

Yes! Someone who understands my needs to make people cry! xD

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NarwhalsvsUnicorns In reply to ShayHart [2012-08-21 04:34:08 +0000 UTC]

lol if you can make people cry over the internet because you wrote an awesome story you know you have to be doing something right.

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ShayHart In reply to NarwhalsvsUnicorns [2012-08-21 04:45:25 +0000 UTC]

Exactly (:

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julibob84 [2012-08-21 01:45:37 +0000 UTC]

awwww i cant see it

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ShayHart In reply to julibob84 [2012-08-21 02:33:42 +0000 UTC]

It's posted in my journal

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julibob84 In reply to ShayHart [2012-08-22 01:19:31 +0000 UTC]

awesomez

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