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shazy In reply to ??? [2011-11-24 16:06:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for this critique^^ really appreciate it!
I love mewtwo in that first movie^^ i can see exactly what you mean here, zoroark is very similar!
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FighterSoulGirl11 In reply to shazy [2011-11-24 16:23:36 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, and thanks.
And I agree with the Zoruark.
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TheLastHetaira [2011-05-20 20:05:29 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Hoooosnap. That Zoroark looks almost as intimidating as Mewtwo after doing some major damage! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f⦠" width="18" height="18" alt="" title="Fear"/> Love it, but at the same time, I see why you asked for a crit.
So here it is.
Your perspective and concept are both AWESOME. I would seriously regret breaking this fox's illusion; it looks like those claws would tear me a new one if disturbed. Even the goofy ponytail does nothing to disrupt the impression that this is one evil fox. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w⦠" width="23" height="15" alt="" title="Wow!"/> Good job on making the plug for Gen V go from furry wank to "you just YIFFED, didn't you?"
The main flaws I can find lie in the lighting and small marking subtleties. The lighting, while not horrible, feels like it's all over the place - which it kind of is, but that is not the point. Part of what makes lightning so impressive is that it occurs against a dark sky. It feels like the background could be a little darker to make the energy streams and eyes that much brighter.
In regards to the markings, I can barely tell that Zoro's war paint is present. I know it's a bit hard to tell from that angle, but still feels like the red could be brighter.
Stars and reasons:
Vision: I believe this was explained adequately above. No reason to repeat it. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>
Originality: Had to take a point off because it reminded me of the B/W Zoroark card. The energy swirls have definitely been done before. The perspective has not (as far as I know).
Technique: MAJOR props on doing this all traditional. Still not sure if the background works for me. It would strike me as more impressive if Zoro was coming out of the darkness. More could have been done; still, very nice.
Impact: The pose and overall awesomeness made me want to comment as soon as I saw it. Sure, my own nitpicking daunted that a little, but not too much. Well done; this might be my highest Impact rating ever.
Overall: Could use some background work, but WOW. You deserve money.
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shazy In reply to TheLastHetaira [2011-05-21 16:16:16 +0000 UTC]
Firstly, Thankyou so much for giving me a crit on this! Really appreciate it^^
Right, i'm gonna say that i think alot of the issues you pointed out are mostly because this is a traditional piece. The lighting is a bit messy, as you say, and it could be darker in places. If this had been digital, i would have probably done alot better with the background as its alot easier than having to do it all on paper. I get a bit lazy with watercolour paint and just throw it everywhere, same with chalk. Thats a problem with me though, ha ha. Also, regarding the war paint, i probably should have made that more evident around his eyes, but as his mouth isnt visible i couldnt include all of it. Ah well
Glad you still like it^^ I dont really like Zoroark as a pokemon, seeing him as just another lucario, but it was fun trying to make him badass XD
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shazy In reply to TheLastHetaira [2011-05-21 23:17:16 +0000 UTC]
ha ha oh yeah!! I can see now how that would work. Zoroark is such a troll pokemon, ha ha!
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FoxGamer13 [2018-01-15 16:54:57 +0000 UTC]
A Zoroark would be a wonderful sidekick to magicians. Just gotta spruce them up a little.
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TheEasterArt [2016-06-27 09:53:34 +0000 UTC]
fav pokemon doing bad-ass things, golden star
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shazy In reply to TheEasterArt [2016-06-27 19:16:53 +0000 UTC]
xD aw thanks!
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shazy In reply to BrokenMelody13 [2016-03-17 15:36:54 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much!! really happy you like it ^^
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bbninjas [2016-03-12 04:01:52 +0000 UTC]
Would I be able to use this piece for the illustration of the Zoroark card in my TCG Fake Card setΒ Knightly Nights ? If I could, I will credit you there as well as on the card.Β
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shazy In reply to bbninjas [2016-03-12 17:46:23 +0000 UTC]
Yes sure, go ahead^^ thanks for offering to credit me~
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bbninjas In reply to shazy [2016-05-09 06:37:45 +0000 UTC]
I finally got it done - here
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shazy In reply to bbninjas [2016-03-13 13:19:09 +0000 UTC]
That makes you a lot better than many people ^^
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bbninjas In reply to shazy [2016-03-13 22:07:06 +0000 UTC]
Wooo~ that's good depending on how you look at it. >~<
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Gamzguy17 [2014-07-11 15:00:11 +0000 UTC]
I've only just started going through your back catalogue....
I'm....just stunned. Just stunnedΒ Β Β Β
Not just by this amazing depiction of Zoroark, but by the sheer variety of moods and tones that I've witnessed in your works.
Like, I'm listening to my music and mixing my covers alongside my observations of your imagery, and it is quite an experience!
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shazy In reply to Gamzguy17 [2014-07-11 19:05:30 +0000 UTC]
Ugh my back catalogue is too big xD I used to update so much and now i barely update at allΒ
I'm really glad you like this one x33 thanks so much, that does sound like an interesting experience xD
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Gamzguy17 In reply to shazy [2014-07-11 19:19:41 +0000 UTC]
That's because IT IS! XD
& you're very welcome. It is pretty cool to go back to the beginning and work back up again XP
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kierra172 [2014-06-29 13:56:31 +0000 UTC]
omg wow
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shazy In reply to kierra172 [2014-06-29 19:03:09 +0000 UTC]
thanks~
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kierra172 In reply to shazy [2014-06-30 12:20:32 +0000 UTC]
yw
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Bugerman101 [2012-06-27 01:40:07 +0000 UTC]
This is Amazing
I love the pose. And the Lightining and the glow in Zoarorks eyes makes it seem so powerful! i love this!
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shazy In reply to Bugerman101 [2012-06-27 11:18:22 +0000 UTC]
thankyouuu
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TriForceFluffy [2011-11-26 09:24:54 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing O_o My god I wish I had that coloring ability...
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shazy In reply to Dreyfus2006 [2011-11-19 16:15:29 +0000 UTC]
I agree, i do not like Zoroark that much at all, it is far too popular for what it is actually...
But still, i'm glad you think it looks cool from my artwork XD I enjoy working with colour the most, get very picky about colour sets and palettes etc. Thanks so much!
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Ryou-VeRua [2011-10-26 00:34:59 +0000 UTC]
Mmmm I can tell you used a lot of traditional techniques on this - it looks great ~ I love it!
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shazy In reply to Ryou-VeRua [2011-10-26 00:35:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks^^
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shadow450 [2011-07-23 17:56:23 +0000 UTC]
Awesome
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shazy In reply to shadow450 [2011-07-23 20:29:05 +0000 UTC]
^^
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StampyDragon [2011-07-19 18:47:18 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, very nice I really like the grittyness of the colours here. Good job.
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Silverstar44 [2011-05-24 21:07:57 +0000 UTC]
Holy cow! Thanks for drawing my request!!!! Zoroark looks so awesome and deadly! I'd hate to break its illusion if it looked like this!
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shazy In reply to Silverstar44 [2011-05-25 11:29:30 +0000 UTC]
XD you're welcome^^
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midna83098 [2011-05-24 03:31:26 +0000 UTC]
Amazing....
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shazy In reply to midna83098 [2011-05-24 15:23:19 +0000 UTC]
thanks^^
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midna83098 In reply to shazy [2011-05-24 19:27:14 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! ^^
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AzurethePanda [2011-05-23 17:04:15 +0000 UTC]
Sooooo very epic! X3
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AzurethePanda In reply to shazy [2011-05-24 06:18:51 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.^^
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sapphire-addict [2011-05-23 12:55:02 +0000 UTC]
This is seriously awesome! One of my all time favorites of your work
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tigers4eva2134 [2011-05-23 05:23:02 +0000 UTC]
wow.... what game or show is this from? I don't really know, cause I haven't seen it before but WOW... that looks AMAZING like always XD
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shazy In reply to tigers4eva2134 [2011-05-23 22:17:59 +0000 UTC]
Its a pokemon, ha ha
thanks^^
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