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Published: 2008-03-30 16:44:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 51; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description She's got my heart, but doesn't know it.
I want it back, but she can't find.
She's got another one too.
But mines on the bottom of her shoe.
Red gum, unnoticed.
It'll fall off eventually, or scraped on a step.
I want it back, but I want her to have it.
What the hell am i supposed to do?
Got my fire, glowing bright.
Tromping with all her might.
Not quite a mess, cracked and chipped.
Leaking and pouring, silently leaving a trail of despair.
No one to tell her; "it's alright, you didn't know, it's not you don't care..."
"Just know of the trail that matches your hair."
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Comments: 8

ShadowOfTheSun89 [2008-03-30 18:33:31 +0000 UTC]

dude...doesnt mean you need to tell a guy to grow a pair. that's just never right no matter what the circumstance. i like the symbolism with her hair. very nice. i believe she's got a hold of more hearts than you or even she knows. how does she do it?

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ShenlongArcane In reply to ShadowOfTheSun89 [2008-03-30 18:48:37 +0000 UTC]

I wish I knew. I want to find your one about the Porcelain doll. That was awesome but I can't find it!

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FatherOfTwo [2008-03-30 16:48:22 +0000 UTC]

You need to grow a pair and tell her how you feel.
I just went through the same thing and got rejected.
She knew I was attracted to her, and she liked me, but not that way. But she was compassionate with her rejection, which showed she did care.
Time will tell if we can remain friends, but at least I'm not torturing myself anymore.....and I can move on.

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Narutofangirl29 In reply to FatherOfTwo [2008-03-31 01:33:55 +0000 UTC]

yeah , its not that easy telling the one you love you love them

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ShenlongArcane In reply to FatherOfTwo [2008-03-30 17:34:57 +0000 UTC]

Dude, you have no idea what you're talking about. My situation is WAY different than what you think, so before those with preteen minds comment on this as yoy did, please note, not everyone has the same ass situation. It's seriously ALOT more complicated than that as in she's an ex with a new BF. I didn't get rejected but dumped.

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Narutofangirl29 In reply to ShenlongArcane [2008-03-31 01:34:34 +0000 UTC]

ha, i feel your pain...sort of

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FatherOfTwo In reply to ShenlongArcane [2008-03-30 17:53:20 +0000 UTC]

Sorry. Being dumped sucks.

From the poem "she has my heart and doesn't know it", you have to admit that has the unmistakable air of pining from afar, the whole unrequited love thing. I got the wrong impression. Again sorry about that.

Denial, Anger, Depression, Bargaining.
The stuff that great poetry is made of.

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ShenlongArcane In reply to FatherOfTwo [2008-03-30 18:49:52 +0000 UTC]

It's alright, I didn't notice, guess people only see what they are used to seeing, or try to linkit to their own situations, damn human nature! lol

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