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Docard [2023-09-19 20:17:07 +0000 UTC]
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Animatorsnake [2015-09-14 23:08:50 +0000 UTC]
This is a pretty interesting comic, and i like the drawing style you got going
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xxxMakixxx [2015-09-12 18:46:15 +0000 UTC]
It promises to be great! Nice comic!
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flutter-butter55678 [2015-03-31 18:51:45 +0000 UTC]
this art is amazing. my drawings are like crap compared to this.
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flutter-butter55678 In reply to sherwoodwhisper [2015-04-08 20:43:31 +0000 UTC]
IDK. I just end up smudging it with my finger. I mostly do only simple doodles of HTTYD, Minecraft, and MLP.
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Exovare [2014-12-25 04:45:50 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that's amazing.
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templar127 [2014-12-20 13:52:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh WOW! I love the art style!
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ChaosDrgon [2014-12-17 17:37:46 +0000 UTC]
I love the art, I do, but the delivery of that back story was cringe inducing. She went from answering one question, straight into a monologue that answered a bunch of other questions nobody had even asked yet. It stopped being a conversation and turned into a recitation.Β
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ChaosDrgon In reply to sherwoodwhisper [2014-12-19 16:32:42 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry, you'll get it. Just keep working at it.
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Raph13th [2014-12-17 06:14:47 +0000 UTC]
Thats was very nice.
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whoeveriam0iam14222 [2014-12-15 15:19:48 +0000 UTC]
I'm not really interested in comics but your art is so gorgeous
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sphynn [2014-12-15 15:09:04 +0000 UTC]
I think I like it better uncolored. Β It changes the feel of the story. Β I know I'm reading too much into it, but the grayscale goes well with her sense of loneliness from being an outsider in a new place. Β It's a cliche, but I think it could be nice to gradually introduce color (maybe one character or location at a time) as she begins to feel more comfortable and a sense of belonging in her new home. Β Either way, a good start to a new story.
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sphynn In reply to sherwoodwhisper [2014-12-19 02:45:15 +0000 UTC]
No worries, I'm sure it will be great however it goes... as long as you are happy with what you are doing then it will be worth reading. Β Good start, and I hope for more, eventually (no pressure, inspiration comes when it wants, and even then sometimes life gets in the way, but once in a while I would like to see more of this comic.)
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Element0fKindness [2014-12-15 03:06:07 +0000 UTC]
Wow!Β Got yourself an instant follower.Β Β Incredible job!Β The expressions are beyond magnificent!
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fotland42 [2014-12-15 00:52:11 +0000 UTC]
A bit of constructive criticism: you should take care to make familiar characters quickly recognizable when they are first introduced into the story, unless the point is for the identity to be a surprise of course. When you're making an uncolored comic about ponies, this is a requirement that you should be actively keeping in mind, because color is the primary cue for distinguishing ponies, and you don't get to use it. In this case, I wasn't sure that Lyra was Lyra until I read the author's comments; I think that what was throwing me off was that you drew Lyra's mane as being a single solid color, not two. So my advice is that if you're not going to provide an alternate strong cue (e.g. showing the cutie mark or having somepony refer to the new pony by name), and the reader is to determine the identity by a holistic look at the pony's appearance, you should check carefully that you don't omit any details of that appearance that would reasonably be visible, at least in the first couple of panels including the character.
I don't know if most people are bothered as much as I am by not being sure if they can identify a character, but either way clarity is a good habit to form. And you're already doing pretty well; Rose was easily recognizable just as a head. I want to make sure you focus some effort on further improving this valuable skill.
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sherwoodwhisper In reply to fotland42 [2014-12-15 01:11:48 +0000 UTC]
Stroke by stroke, sketching it together.
Deadline looms, don't you know the watcher's always right?
Even if my pencil choice was perfect, gotta get them all done by tonight...
Fotland, it was meant to be more simple, Lyra is a tale for 'nother night.
I'm drawing them together!~
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Mike-Rosoft [2014-12-14 21:29:11 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done!
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sherwoodwhisper In reply to Nevel7 [2014-12-14 19:23:49 +0000 UTC]
It's much fun to tell the story as well. ^__^
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sweetymimy22 [2014-12-14 17:55:52 +0000 UTC]
is this a Kind of Comic or something
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bugsydor [2014-12-14 17:32:20 +0000 UTC]
Have to say I love your art style. It's so cleanly done, and it's just different enough from show style to make it unique. Your storytelling skills aren't bad, either.
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Wolfbane3333 [2014-12-14 16:31:22 +0000 UTC]
I would watch a movie about your OC in that rainy town. It's an interesting setting.
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tigreanpony [2014-12-14 14:09:38 +0000 UTC]
This was a very nice piece I look forward to seeing more.
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HunterBrony101 [2014-12-14 12:41:46 +0000 UTC]
Very nice.
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Coolguy9000 [2014-12-14 11:20:26 +0000 UTC]
This is pretty nice.
I like the art style you use here, it's very well done and your use of shadows is also very good.
I can't wait to seeΒ more.
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JokerPony [2014-12-14 10:54:27 +0000 UTC]
I guess she wasn't expecting whole 3 season long lifestory about Twilight, simply asking this question xD
I love your style!~I may not be the fan of traditional artwork but it actually adds quite a lot of charm, also it really has nice lineart. Very good job on their faces and anatomy I know it's kinda tricky at times. The only thing I can complain is adding a bit more detail in Sugarcube corner's backgrounds, but I guess you keep it simple to not drag attention away from the characters. Overall, great job.
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MajorLaughmaster [2014-12-14 10:40:09 +0000 UTC]
Wow the hand drawings are very nice!
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SVAndrei [2014-12-14 10:08:13 +0000 UTC]
Love your style. It's beautiful! I'll check back to see where this is going. Keep up the good work!
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MrUnimpressive [2014-12-14 07:12:10 +0000 UTC]
it is now 1:11 a.m. and i cant stop looking at this beautiful page.
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smallsight [2014-12-14 06:34:36 +0000 UTC]
Your pencil art is beautiful, the story is very will-written, and you clearly deserved the EQD showcase (although I think Wheelz may be jumping the gun a little by pushing you to try to go pro). Β This definitely deserves encouragement to continue. Β Great job.
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