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Shes-t — Epic Failure -Mission 1- Pt 1

Published: 2009-11-03 09:45:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 2429; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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XD I've been aching to draw this for sooooooo long now...Plus I needed to take a break from the stress of so much homework...>.<

lol fear my horrible sketchy-ness, I just did this quick to relieve stress....even though it took a little while to do...I enjoyed it. Let me know if you can't read my messy writing. I dunno when I'll be able to continue it but I plan to.

So this is Venusaur, Blastoise, and Charizard on a mission, which I figure will be a rescue mission. Of course, they are all idiots so things are bound to go wrong...XD

Here's a brief bio of each of them...


Venusaur--

Name: Briar
He is the unspoken leader of the group, mostly due to the fact that he is constantly trying to keep the other two focused (and in line). He takes his missions very seriously.

On the outside, Briar is friendly and outgoing, well-spoken and confident. He constantly 'sucks up' to his superiors and is always found with a smile on face. He believes in humouring people to make his life easier. However, on the inside he is a control freak and needs to have things go his way and gets frustrated easily if they don't. He has a few anger issues but somehow manages to keep his composure when around others.

For whatever reason he is not able to remain calm when talking to Rayne and is constantly yelling at him for being an idiot. (as long as no one else is around of course)


Blastoise--

Name: Rayne
Rayne is a player in all sense of the word. All he seems to care about is his looks and woman. Aside from those, he doesn't take much else very seriously. He is arrogant and narcissistic; in his opinion he's the best thing since sliced bread. He is laid back and takes life as it goes. Nothing seems to really phase him all that much. He is a very smooth talker and can usually talk his way out of most situations. He is always a true gentleman when talking to women; however, he can get very sarcastic and rude when it comes to talking to other men. When it comes to missions, he could really care less what happens as long as his beautiful face isn't scarred in any way. Although, he does thoroughly enjoy pushing Briar's buttons (pissing him off).


Charizard--

Name: Blaize
Blaize isn't shy by any means but he doesn't talk much nor does he express emotions very well, his face is usually void of them. Like Rayne, he just flows with where life takes him without much care about what happens. He seems even less phased by things than Rayne. He is mostly indifferent to everything but is still very loyal to his team and follows directions without any complaints. However, he tends to become distracted rather easily (or lost in thought) and ends up only hearing half of the instructions.
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Comments: 31

SleLikePie [2011-11-20 07:14:11 +0000 UTC]

I nearly died of laughter! Loving these comics
You are awesome! Keep up the good work!

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Tepperzart [2011-09-12 23:23:18 +0000 UTC]

I think it's really cool how detailed and organized you were with their into paragraphs ^^ It was a good way to introduce things! xDD
I can already tell how foolish these three are xD They're gonna be in a lot of trouble, lol.

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Shes-t In reply to Tepperzart [2011-09-13 21:50:32 +0000 UTC]

This was originally suppose to be a one shot which is probably why the quality is so much better than the other pages lol...and then I continued it...now I need to finish it...>.>

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Tepperzart In reply to Shes-t [2011-09-14 01:29:41 +0000 UTC]

xDDDD Well, we get and lose steam as we go, but it's really not a bad story ^^ Even the worser pages aren't really as bad as you think x)

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Darksendrise [2010-07-13 21:26:48 +0000 UTC]

omg wtf my names Briar

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Yurbleyurble13 [2010-03-24 23:17:13 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome XD I offically love Rayne, btb

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slaphappyX3 [2010-01-15 04:02:07 +0000 UTC]

i no this is completely random but i think i have the same hair style as briar..O.o

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Shes-t In reply to slaphappyX3 [2010-01-16 09:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Haha, that's awesome. XD

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RadenWA [2009-11-12 12:53:08 +0000 UTC]

OMG this is AWESOME! I really like the characters and how you gave them personalities. Makes me want to make comics with my gijinka too... X3

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Shes-t In reply to RadenWA [2009-11-13 17:54:06 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks! You should; its lots of fun. XD

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GingaDreamer [2009-11-04 17:21:30 +0000 UTC]

Special agents. That's what they were. Humans that were spliced with Pokemon DNA, in order to become some of the best hero's in the world... Or the biggest failures as Briar had found out on such a big mission.

Rayne and Blaize had decided to make a mockery of their biggest mission yet, and of course, Briar had flipped his lid and shouted at both of them like a possessed demon of sorts. That had led to all three of their captures, but thankfully they were sent to the same cell block capture inside the base.

Briar sighed as he looked around, taking notice of how they were taken in for the time being, and how the guards were laughing at their capture. It wasn't his fault the other two were complete idiots. They had come to rescue one of their own, but so far, they had failed.

The Venasaur Gijinka was about to start blaming those two again for them getting captured when he saw their target sitting in a cell they passed. Only for a brief moment did they see the red hued hair of the Camerupt as he sat in silence in his room.

His lip was being chewed on slightly from pain, and with the help of the mirror behind that one, it was easy to tell he had tried to break out with his special attack.

Camerupt was known as the Eruption Pokemon, and so his Gijinka should have no problem preforming the signature move of his Eruption. However, when he used the attack, the lava and rocks would shoot out of his back, burning his skin and his back into two painful black, circular burns.

All three of the newly captured Gijinka's heart's instantly understood his pain as the male sat there in silence, all of them silently agreed to help the male out, and get him out no matter what.

They were put into one cell each, as the guards locked the doors and left.

The supposed leader started to take charge instantly, telling them both they needed to think of a plan of some kind to get the captured Gijinka out of there without a moment to loose. As the Venasaur began to rattle off plans, Rayne tried not to laugh.

One cell door slid open as Blaize stepped out of his cell and fixed his steel fingers back into place on his hand, having used two of them to pick the lock on his cell door.

"Or... we could use Blaize's lock picking skills..." Briar said with a twitching eyebrow as the Charizard just quietly unlocked the cells for his two team mates, and then looked around. Alright, some of the Gijinka's in the other cells looked like they belonged here.. but other's didn't. No, for now they were to get the Camerupt out, and scout the building, then come back for other's but for now, Camerupt was their main concern.

With a sigh, the Charizard went to the door where the Camerupt was caged inside, and opened the door. He was then lightly pushed aside by the Venasaur who instantly took the role of savior and offered his hand to the Camerupt who needed a lot more help then just a couple bandages.

"Let's go... boss is waiting." He said smiling warmly as the Camerupt stood up slowly, and flinched, even walking was hard with his back like this, but he would make sure he could press on.

"Right." He said, his voice stiff but firm. He had to be able to get out, so he could recover and then come back and punish this base, like it had been in his mission.

".... shouldn't we do something about them?" Blaize asked pointing to the guard's who were rushing at them, while Rayne just grinned and knelt down on the ground pulling one of his gun's from god only knew were to blast them down the trail. "YES! BULL'S EYE! Wait till I tell the ladies about-"

"STOP THINKING ABOUT THE LADIES AND LET'S GET OUT OF HERE!" The Venasaur shouted as the four of them started to run out, Camerupt in the center of them as the male tried to stay up right and focused. They could get out now! Rayne was having fun blasting the guards out of the way with his gun's... from where he pulled those things, no one knew.


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This is the first gift I can give to you...o.o I hope you like it! T^T I want more information on all them too! XD *hides from yous*

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Shes-t In reply to GingaDreamer [2009-11-05 18:00:54 +0000 UTC]

O.O!! Wow! Thank you so much! What a wonderful surprise to come to! I've read this so many times now. I really like how you portrayed Briar. It's also very close to how I had planned on continuing. If you don't mind I would like to use some elements and ideas from your story in my next comic page. I like how you added Camerupt; I never really thought about adding my other gijinkas...lol...stupid me...But I would definitely like to! Haha, Thank you again!

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GingaDreamer In reply to Shes-t [2009-11-09 00:14:13 +0000 UTC]

I love your art work, and I came back to you USING the idea I was like.... WOOOOOOOT !!!! *does a happy dance* See? I told you once you did a comic or two, I would write a fanfiction for you.... I've been away at PMX, and it's dying down today so yeah! I finally got around to being on the computer, and I'm really glad you like it!!

I love your gijinka's....and I plan on writing a fandom ficlet in each one's.... about interaction and stuff between them, that might give you ideas..o.o I still can't believe how beautiful a surprise this was to come home to!!! You liked it!! ^_^

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Shes-t In reply to GingaDreamer [2009-11-09 03:02:54 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you! XD I'll have to slowly add other gijinkas into the comics and think up up bios for them.

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GingaDreamer In reply to Shes-t [2009-11-09 18:14:19 +0000 UTC]

I have a couple ideas here and there in my mind.... for the character's. Like your Dragonite is just...epic win. xD

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Gothic-YaDaj [2009-11-04 04:40:41 +0000 UTC]

great job but i have to say my fav is Charizard aka Blaize for some reason I always love Charizard in the Pokemon series! Heh oh well I can't wait to see what happens next keep updating XD

Laterz

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Shes-t In reply to Gothic-YaDaj [2009-11-04 05:42:50 +0000 UTC]

^^ I dunno who my fav char would be out of the three of them but Briar is fun to draw (despite his slightly annoying to draw outfit...lol) XD It's a shame, though, that I have so much homework right now T.T I would love to continue ASAP. >.>

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Gothic-YaDaj In reply to Shes-t [2009-11-09 15:49:28 +0000 UTC]

COOL I WILL WAIT FOR IT THEN BUT DON'T OVER WORK UR SELF

OKAY?

LATERZ

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xXx-sOuL-xXx [2009-11-03 23:51:20 +0000 UTC]

xD This is great.
*thumbs up*
Briar is teh smex xD

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ShayloCray [2009-11-03 20:57:16 +0000 UTC]

I love it xD You're my hero

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Shes-t In reply to ShayloCray [2009-11-04 03:58:00 +0000 UTC]

XD

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GingaDreamer [2009-11-03 19:46:20 +0000 UTC]

This is epic win... not epic failure. The mission was a fail, but that just makes it all the funnier.

xD They should have this really cute boss that they get order's from, who is completely evil when he/she is angry. xDD

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Shes-t In reply to GingaDreamer [2009-11-04 05:28:56 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I can totally see them cowering in front of a small and adorable looking character as they are told everything they did wrong.

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GingaDreamer In reply to Shes-t [2009-11-04 16:48:11 +0000 UTC]

*pictures the cute and powerful Pokemon* Mew, one of the tiny Legendary Pokemon... Hmmm... *bursts out laughing picturing all of them taking orders from a Shellder or something like that* xDD

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Shes-t In reply to GingaDreamer [2009-11-05 18:02:50 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I'm sure I can come up with some horribly hilarious boss for them...*leaves to plot* >X]

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GingaDreamer In reply to Shes-t [2009-11-09 00:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm.... what's the cutest Pokemon you can picture that could never be a horrible, scary Pokemon, but at the same time, you could never make them angry?

Mew, Eevee, Psyduck, Jigglypuff, Shinx, or something else.... XD I dunno, but I would love to see a Jigglypuff being in charge of at least something in the main office... that would be awesome and epic sauce... xD

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Shes-t In reply to GingaDreamer [2009-11-09 02:51:57 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I can just see Jigglypuff getting ready to sing and everyone would like "OMG!! RUN!!" XD Hehe, and you just gave me an idea for another stupid mission they can do. X3

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GingaDreamer In reply to Shes-t [2009-11-09 18:15:24 +0000 UTC]

Sweet! xD I love the idea's your artwork gives me. And for some reason, your avatar, the little box that represents you....reminds me of Scizor, Scyther's evolved form as a humanoid. xD

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Shes-t In reply to GingaDreamer [2009-11-10 05:26:28 +0000 UTC]

lol X3

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Star-aesh [2009-11-03 19:44:19 +0000 UTC]

Yay! XD
I love Briar's little flower, so manly^^
'Stealthy like orange camo pants!' I'm happy that you put that in^^
LOOOVe the last panel XD
The dialogue is grand and takes me back to the heady days of Comic (though I guess I ended up writing a lot of that dialogue in the end...).
Yay, sketchy comic of awesome^^

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Shes-t In reply to Star-aesh [2009-11-04 04:06:03 +0000 UTC]

lol my lazy representation of the flower I drew on his char design...XD I had to put in the stealthy like orange camo pants, nothing else can compare to their awesomeness ^^.

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