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shido-burrito — I Wish It Didn't End This Way

Published: 2008-11-05 03:58:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 1241; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 16
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Description I hear the sound of a heart
from the shadow in the dark
waiting for the poison to hit its mark
(listen--my son)

I see the darkness
surround the shape on the ground the
killer straight up and a body face
down (firstborn-last one)

I hear the
din of the screams, sorrow in streams
the smell of farewell and gasoline
(listen--my son)

I see a heart set free
and my legacy hear a voice from a
shadow that is beckoning me
(firstborn-last one--listen)



Pic inspired by the song "The Last Firstborn" by Celldweller (Growling Machines Remix, of course). And I wouldn't have known about the song if it weren't for this freakin' awesome Death Note AMV: [link]
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Comments: 25

RuetheFox [2018-12-12 21:23:40 +0000 UTC]

Looks amazing!

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shido-burrito In reply to RuetheFox [2018-12-14 18:20:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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CapriciousReaper [2008-11-06 23:45:30 +0000 UTC]

Again, Celldweller RULES~

Amazing work! I was also saddened by both of their deaths. D:

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shido-burrito In reply to CapriciousReaper [2008-11-07 05:24:31 +0000 UTC]

Hoooray!!! Listening to "We Will Never Die" makes me wanna draw Shido and Cain >_<

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CapriciousReaper In reply to shido-burrito [2008-11-11 01:00:30 +0000 UTC]

OH yes~~~ Delicious! *-*

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Cosmic--Chaos [2008-11-05 22:01:16 +0000 UTC]

I know, man, I cried when both Light and L died It was so sad...

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shido-burrito In reply to Cosmic--Chaos [2008-11-06 00:58:22 +0000 UTC]

I know it was! I wished they let at least ONE of them live! Well I guess Near lived.... but I dislike him greatly. Wah!

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Cosmic--Chaos In reply to shido-burrito [2008-11-06 01:15:49 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, Near sucks! >

All the good characters died, Light, L, Watari, Matt, Soichiro, Naiomi, etc.

I didn't give a damn about Misa or Takada, and Mikami was kinda cool.

Well, Ryuk lived, he was awesome, but he killed Light

The worst part is that everyone who died went to nothingness, all their efforts were in vain Either that or Ryuk lied.

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shido-burrito In reply to Cosmic--Chaos [2008-11-06 02:36:42 +0000 UTC]

There's always the rumor that Light became a Shinigami. Ryuk's always commenting on how Light would make a great Shinigami. And the Shinigami Realm is neither Heaven or Hell (that's kinda stretching it). There's actually a great doujinshi about it.

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Cosmic--Chaos In reply to shido-burrito [2008-11-06 03:55:04 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, I gotta read that! Where can I find the doujin? And its not Yaoi is it? I don't like Yaoi

I hope that's what happened to Light. He can be Kira for eternity and show Near & the SPK what for!

I actually wrote a DN epilogue of Light turning into a Shinigami [link] [link]

Oh yeah... long live Kira! Yeah, I'm nuts.

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shido-burrito In reply to Cosmic--Chaos [2008-11-06 03:58:26 +0000 UTC]

LMAO, if I didn't love L so much I'd be a huge Kira fan. So then I read the Death Note novel, Another Note, and I fell in love with Beyond too. It's like L and Kira combined!!

As for the doujinshi I JUST posted it in my journal. There is a page and a half of a yaoi part but other than that the story doesn't focus on a relationship. It's more about Light trying to redeem himself before he becomes a true Shinigami. It has really good art! The translation is kinda shaky but it's better than nothin'!

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Cosmic--Chaos In reply to shido-burrito [2008-11-06 21:33:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm currentely reading it

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BoboeTheElf [2008-11-05 17:47:38 +0000 UTC]

Vah, so pretty! You are the master of line-art. *bows repeatedly*

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shido-burrito In reply to BoboeTheElf [2008-11-06 01:00:07 +0000 UTC]

Meeeheehee! Thank you! Sometimes I'm so sad that my lineart gets eaten by my color!

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BoboeTheElf In reply to shido-burrito [2008-11-23 00:16:04 +0000 UTC]

Don't be sad! *gives you tissue*

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shido-burrito In reply to BoboeTheElf [2008-11-23 05:16:14 +0000 UTC]

*eats the tissue*

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BoboeTheElf In reply to shido-burrito [2008-12-22 21:15:58 +0000 UTC]

Would you please eat my Algebra 2 homework?

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flashglowshine [2008-11-05 12:58:23 +0000 UTC]

wow thats gorgeous and it sounds like a cool song! it was a good choice to make it sypia it adds. u drew light really well!

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shido-burrito In reply to flashglowshine [2008-11-06 01:01:10 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Thank you! Usually he looks pretty dumb when I try to draw him, but I'm really happy with this!

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flashglowshine In reply to shido-burrito [2008-11-06 13:06:48 +0000 UTC]

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Dark-Hisashai [2008-11-05 05:01:44 +0000 UTC]

simply amazing

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shido-burrito In reply to Dark-Hisashai [2008-11-05 05:10:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm not sure whether or not to color it. It might take away from it, actually.... hmmmm.

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Dark-Hisashai In reply to shido-burrito [2008-11-05 13:23:44 +0000 UTC]

Personally, I like the line art. It brings the focus to their expressions, which in turn, gives the piece an extremely strong sense of emotion.

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shido-burrito In reply to Dark-Hisashai [2008-11-06 01:02:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I think you just gave me the best and most professional critique I've ever gotten here on DA! Thank you!

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Dark-Hisashai In reply to shido-burrito [2008-11-06 13:40:11 +0000 UTC]

No problem! I love this piece!

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