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Lyran-Wolf [2012-09-09 19:12:28 +0000 UTC]

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Alright lets start the good things first.

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I love how you drew the facial expression on Aoi, you can tell hes very upset and angry. cant say much about Ryo's xD but this is a really amazing lookin piece of work! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

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The blood looks well done and I love the snow flakes The shading is really nice too e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

Alright, now there are only a few things that bother me a bit.

Your tree roots sort of...look like their floating, and so does Aoi. Add shadows to the ground, mind you they dont have to be hard shadows, but just enough to tell that he is standing on the ground. A little snow might help if it covered it a bit on the back of him and around his paws/the roots since it is blizzarding out, in animes they dont really do this because it would be hard to animate snow on their bodies. (atleast I think it would be) it doesnt have to be alot on aoi just because it looks like hes been moving. If its been snowing for a while, the trees would have alot on their branches and trunks and roots.

the roots should be more angled also. as if they are striking into the ground, to show they are holding themselves on to something.

As for the trees in the background, i would say to add more depth to them, like layers of trees as they go out, showing depth in the picture and just how big the forest around him is.

Now the last thing I would talk about is Aoi's neck.

the anatomy looks pretty good on his body, so I wont say much about that. However its mostly just the neck.

The head looks like was pasted on, to clear this up make it more fluffier and a bit more longer. The line that goes from the cheek puff part to the jaw could be erased out, to take away the effect of him having such a hard edge on his face (unless that is your style)

With dogs like beagles, mastiffs etc. It is noticeable their jawlines because their fur isnt very thick, however wolves have very little noticeable cut off points, though they do have jaw fluffs, it doesnt interrupt the fur from being fluffy. Eh its hard to explain.

Anyway, over all I really love the impact of this picture and xD Im a bit of an Aoi fan so...WOO!

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Sharlia [2012-09-08 19:54:04 +0000 UTC]

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NOOO! RYOKEN! a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/r/c… " alt=" " title="cryingplz" />
He can't die! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Crying"/> *sobs with heavy sadness* Lulwut? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="XD"/>

Okay, there's clearly a lot of emotion and regret in this masterpiece! It gives a fantastic and gripping message, "Don't, take things for granted!" I like it, it's very cold and icy, lovely touch to the feeling! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Aww"/>

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I absolutley love the way you draw snow, I wish I could do snow as great as you can! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/>
The trees look very blury and hard to make out which is a good thing, you don't want to focus too much on the background.
Also, it looks very effective too, it creates an effect, like when your eyes start to water and some things go blury, yeah, a bit like that! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> Also the Blood stains on the floor look so realistic! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="La la la la"/>

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I love Ao's expression, his face, laced with venom and hatred to whovever did this to Ryoken! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d… " width="21" height="15" alt="" title="I am a dummy!"/>
Ryoken's just led there, dead! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Crying"/> a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/a/f… " alt=" " title="facepalmplz" />
I love it so much! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

I love this so much! :'3
Well done and keep it up! <3
Please don't let Ryoken die! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="21" alt="" title="Laughing my ass off!"/>
I know I ask this all the time but, JoinMe? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="XD"/>

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icebreath3 [2012-09-10 20:43:14 +0000 UTC]

it's sad, but beautiful at the same time, excelent work, it's hard to put beauty and saddnes together in one piece of art and still have it look this great.

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Meowimator [2012-09-09 01:50:15 +0000 UTC]

SO MUCH EMOTION!! I LOVE IT! :'D

Dont die Ryoken!! D:

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alphakeen [2012-09-08 20:41:20 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, this is how Keenya looked when Ferox was killed the first time; I went to take a shower while Ferox was on a mission to kill himself........................... :C now its just a memory, but to Keenya its a fault...... she was so upset, and so was I!!! I CRIED IN REAL LIFE WHEN FEROX WAS "KILLED" THE FIRST TIME!!!!!!

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Aminoob [2012-09-08 20:01:22 +0000 UTC]

Omgggg this is awesome.
Gotta love when you kill
MY FREAKING HUBBY.

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TheWolfFight [2012-09-08 19:24:40 +0000 UTC]

There's a lot of emotion in the piece... and you've caught the emotion well on Ryo's face. He looks both sad and depressed about Ryoken's death but angry at himself for being there too late and perhaps thinking himself as a failure for not saving his friend. Your shading is less detailed in this pic but it still looks really nice and I love the background as always. ^^ There's one tiny thing I want to point out. In part 2 Ryo has his sword with him but in part 3 his sword isn't there.

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Animal-Cartoonist140 [2012-09-08 19:23:40 +0000 UTC]

Love Ao's expression in this! :faints: Why are you so epic?? X3
I love how Ryoken's just "That orange puff in the corner" x3

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