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Shimaira — Tranquillity
Published: 2011-02-08 23:07:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 720; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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A gift for ~NobodysWriter---
A Calm Surface,
The Depth Unknown...
No Trace of the Stones Thrown in,
Except for the Small Ripples...
Hidden are the Mountains,
Of Past and Current Hurts...
Deep Below the Serene Surface,
They Lay in Secrecy...
Those Who've been Initiated,
Have Dived down and Seen Them...
The Deep Water needs to be Disturbed,
For it will go Putrid if Left too Long...
The Bubbles of Change start to Rise,
As the Earthquake draws Near...
When It Arrives the Stones will Fall,
Deep into the Earth They will go...
The Soul Lake is left with Less Burdens,
Giving Space for more Beautiful Things...
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Ohhh what an interesting pairing of two pieces!
For the poem, I like that you play around with the capitalization, it gives the poem its own spirit, so to speak.
And I like how you mentioned back to a few ideas I read in another piece you updated. Wonderful word choice.
As for the fractal, I love the colors and the way it mixes so smoothly together and up and around. It's kind of haunting but
in an extremely beautiful and captivating way.
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Thank you very much, and the critique is very welcome 
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Oh really? I'm surprised no one else did!
It was a pleasure to write it up =]
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ur fractal art always seems to amaze me alot ^^
sooooo hypnotizing...
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Bubbles of silence which covers the turmoil within.
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