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ShinKong — Walfas Contest: Prismriver Sisters Christmas
Published: 2013-12-13 00:55:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1968; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 0
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Just a little story about the Prismriver Sisters and their time on Christmas Eve and Christmas Day. Sorry for the lengthy comic. It may not be great or anything, but I at least had fun in making it! Hope everyone (OC and Touhou included) is having a great Holiday!Related content
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Sorry for late reply. Going through some personal life events. But, sadly yes. Layla passed away.
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first i confused where Yuyuko and i realize it
this was very touching ;w;
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Heh, sorry for the confusion. I was trying to do a surprise at the end by adding indications that Layla was actually Yuyuko within the comic. Glad you enjoyed it!
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Disregard that. I have an idea.
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Heh, sorry for taking this idea. At least you got an idea. I would like to see the outcome of it!
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At first, I was confused because I couldn't find Yuyuko. Then I read it again. ;-;
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Yeah, I tried to make it a bit surprising while seeing if anyone can figure it out. I added in some hints within the comics also to indicate that Layla is actually Yuyuko.
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*reads it again* ...Oh. OOOOOOOH. How didn't I notice that "Layla" was eating too much sooner?
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Yep. It is quite ironic for Yuyuko to dress up as another ghost. But she does what she believes to be fun in life.
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I was going to ask where Yuyuko was, since the setting is at her place.
But then I looked over it again... and...
Well done.
(I'm a speed reader.)
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Heh, sorry if it seems confusing. Just trying to do a surprise near the end with Yuyuko still as Layla.
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If possible, you could try to make more indications towards the surprise. (Foreshadowing, I think that's what's it called)
Either way. It still was one hell of a surprise.
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Ah thanks for the advice! I was thinking to see if the two cups of lampreys would give it away or that Yuyuko is no where to be seen. I'll probably put more indications for future comics! Glad that you enjoyed it!
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Hope you enjoyed the little story! And also, hope you enjoy the Walfas Station Wagon!
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