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GodzillaKin [2024-08-14 19:47:37 +0000 UTC]
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Lilpeepi [2022-07-03 19:26:57 +0000 UTC]
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aceina [2020-12-03 13:04:31 +0000 UTC]
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johndoe454 [2020-01-18 21:49:19 +0000 UTC]
Is there pictures to along with this? Please add some or a part 2
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ShinMakeovers In reply to johndoe454 [2020-01-19 19:03:06 +0000 UTC]
I'm an author, not an artist. I can't magically create pictures out of nothing.
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johndoe454 In reply to ShinMakeovers [2020-01-21 23:38:06 +0000 UTC]
On the contrary, I believe that you have everything you need. The logical answer is to out source the work to someone willing to tryย
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ShinMakeovers In reply to johndoe454 [2020-01-22 18:28:52 +0000 UTC]
I don't money to spare on art, and I'm not going to ask someone to do it for free.
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QweenAshley [2020-01-13 06:51:36 +0000 UTC]
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icypika [2019-12-10 00:00:40 +0000 UTC]
Awesome work. I love the new aliens. The Upgrade replacement sounds adorable. Everyone was in character too.ย
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ShinMakeovers In reply to icypika [2019-12-10 01:47:52 +0000 UTC]
Wow, thank you! I'm very flattered to hear that. I tried to make the aliens seem like ones that could potentially appear in the series, and to get everyone acting as in-character as I could. I'm extremely happy to hear that I managed it!
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icypika In reply to ShinMakeovers [2019-12-10 01:56:09 +0000 UTC]
No problem keep up the good work
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MoonSapphire124 [2019-06-15 08:10:02 +0000 UTC]
Another cute and Funny Ben 10 story.ย
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BabyPhoebe1991 [2019-06-09 08:12:54 +0000 UTC]
Awwww, you kept the part with little girl Ben! Wasn't the alien form we did with that like a ghost and she hid in a tree?
Still, this was awesome!!!
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BlindeEye [2019-06-09 03:41:33 +0000 UTC]
Hidden by Owner
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MegamanMaster64 [2019-06-08 23:26:29 +0000 UTC]
What an interesting idea for a story based on the show, why cantBen, get female alien forms? Would have been interesting ,
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JDP100000 In reply to MegamanMaster64 [2020-05-15 08:34:00 +0000 UTC]
In cannon if the alien has gender it will turn into the gender you were born with because in the episode gwen ten a what-if if gwen got the omnitrix not ben she turned into female aliens
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ShinMakeovers In reply to MegamanMaster64 [2019-06-09 17:02:42 +0000 UTC]
I mean there's bound to be some forms that are female only, Ben's just not discovered them.
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TheEverything [2019-06-07 22:00:45 +0000 UTC]
Very nice story. Everyone felt very in-character and their reactions were very believable.ย
I hope Usaritsu sees this and gets inspired; they have a great line of alternate female omnitrix aliens.
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NivekVonBeldo [2019-06-07 21:26:13 +0000 UTC]
Well a component of Omnitrix was to understand alien life form and if those are female only that is very part of the study, for kid ben will be bad, teen one could be more open but still bitching and thinking is unfair, very nice oneshot buddy, very onstyle and spirit what ben 10 was, ben was very IC too
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ShinMakeovers In reply to NivekVonBeldo [2019-06-09 17:01:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I tried my best to keep all the characters acting believably for the series.
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NivekVonBeldo In reply to ShinMakeovers [2019-06-09 17:20:01 +0000 UTC]
Yeah ben acted very online with his own 10 year old self, bitching getting female/girly aliens but having to used it and get use to it, that is ben very well done. So is just a oneshot, will ben stay a boy/male or he will become a full fledge girl/female and Jen later on?
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Shidyk [2019-06-07 20:16:04 +0000 UTC]
This was fun to read.
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ShinMakeovers In reply to Shidyk [2019-06-09 17:00:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I'm glad to hear that.
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random-person-sayshi [2019-06-07 20:05:43 +0000 UTC]
other then the whole "bens sex does not change" thing, this reminds me ofย UsaRitsu 's ben content
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Blade10000 [2019-06-07 19:04:23 +0000 UTC]
Glad you got this done! Good work!
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