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Shinuto In reply to BeenieBop [2013-05-12 00:11:41 +0000 UTC]
thanks. waht do you take to Yuki being such an open glutton?
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Shinuto In reply to BeenieBop [2013-05-12 03:59:34 +0000 UTC]
bad?....how so?
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BeenieBop In reply to Shinuto [2013-05-12 06:32:51 +0000 UTC]
Well you know, say, if there's a scenario where it's all sad or serious. When everyone goes to a food place and she eats like that, it might kill the atmosphere/make things awkward or weird. Well, that's just my take on it. It's not all bad though, but, I'm just saying.
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Shinuto In reply to BeenieBop [2013-05-12 06:35:36 +0000 UTC]
in this kind of universe....that stuff never happens.
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Shinuto In reply to BeenieBop [2013-05-12 14:21:58 +0000 UTC]
keep reading!
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Yami7 [2012-06-09 00:45:06 +0000 UTC]
I've come to notice that you do very well when it comes to transitions between chapters. You manage to end it where it needs to end, but keep just enough info from the reader to keep them wondering what will happen next. Good chapter, no complaints, keep it up~
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Shinuto In reply to Yami7 [2012-06-09 01:50:11 +0000 UTC]
yay! Yeah I got that from the chrracter limitations on the site I orignally made these on. 10,000max limit, fucking please. I can easily do 20,000 but no....only 10k
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Yami7 In reply to Shinuto [2012-06-09 03:00:37 +0000 UTC]
lol, thats why theres always devart and fanfiction~
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Shinuto In reply to Yami7 [2012-06-09 09:51:59 +0000 UTC]
yep.
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Conri672 [2011-09-25 17:29:13 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! I was hoping that you would do another chapter on this.
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Shinuto In reply to Conri672 [2011-09-25 17:58:59 +0000 UTC]
YAY! Now...please tell me the details on what you enjoyed.
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Conri672 In reply to Shinuto [2011-09-25 20:44:00 +0000 UTC]
Nagatos thoughts on her new weight. How Achakura and Nagato interact, oh... and most definitely Nagatos size :3
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Shinuto In reply to Conri672 [2011-09-25 21:10:46 +0000 UTC]
hmm yes...she's doest seem to care what others think.
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