Comments: 28
D-Anthonie [2012-07-31 10:02:57 +0000 UTC]
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First ever critique. Hopefully I do you some justice.
Taking a look at this, overall it seems that your light source remains consistant, which is always good. Nice touch with the screws in the abdomen area.
The legs, at least the little connection points on either side, seem a bit off. I can see that the leg to our left (her right leg) is, I presume, brought toward us (hence the shine), but the connecting point (from one tone to the next, a "V" down into the hamstrings) seems like the right (her left) is lower.
She looks like she's in a position of relative rest, but her hair on the left (her right) is floating a bit, where the other hair is resting on the shoulder.
I like the blue with the optics. It makes it seems like it is glowing, almost alive. The upper streak of blue, however, seems a bit heavy. A bit distracting if you look in that general area, and takes away a bit of the "lifeness" of the optics.
The only other thing I wonder about, but this may just be me, is the sword behind her back. I personally think that the blade is unneeded, and it's possibly just confusing to me why it's there.
Overall, it is a very nice work. I hope I've been helpful. (I know that I'm a bit of a nit-picker)
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jackarcher12 [2012-08-06 01:12:06 +0000 UTC]
Too awesome man...
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Alanza [2012-07-31 14:23:09 +0000 UTC]
Excellent style! Nice work!
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Shiro169 In reply to Alanza [2012-08-09 21:51:24 +0000 UTC]
thnks dude
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CyropsArt [2012-07-30 19:10:06 +0000 UTC]
Nice one ^^
The only thing I could point out: left shoulder is lower than right, but left breast is higher than right. (left when you look at her, not her left X.x )
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kilian777 [2012-07-30 18:07:04 +0000 UTC]
deserves to be a hero in her own right.
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kilian777 In reply to Shiro169 [2012-08-10 21:24:45 +0000 UTC]
Not even Catwoman. Just this, this work of art you have made.
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JoeNittoly [2012-07-30 15:55:41 +0000 UTC]
Pretty cool outfit design!
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The-Phantom-Stranger [2012-07-30 10:51:56 +0000 UTC]
Love how you styled the suit...it has great texture and the design is both sleek and rugged. Nice job with the glowing helmet slits as well.
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DeadCobra [2012-07-29 16:19:33 +0000 UTC]
Cool
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