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ShirubaaNeko In reply to ??? [2009-04-13 00:44:13 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I totally need more Pencils and any blending-tools, while I don't have some, yet XD
It's always those hard shadows, troubling me, because I am afraid to overdo it and am ending up then with not doing enough, so that it looks that way ^,^"
Will really try to make better next time. Thanks very much again ^^
Oh yes, I put the image bit bigger now. You're right. Especially in the motorbike the very small details are easier to see ^,^"
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ShirubaaNeko In reply to ??? [2009-04-11 16:39:12 +0000 UTC]
awww, thank you so much for that great and detailed critique
I am really happy, you like this work, because I put much effort and time into this. And I was very afraid of the jacket, while I was never good with leather. So i am really happy, it turned out well ^.^
You're right, it's tough to see in this size and I am wondering if making it bigger or same size, but without watermark...
Yes, I had my struggles with the frontshadows ^,^" I still have to figure out, which pencils to use for such. Thank you very much for the helpful critique. I will try my very best to improve my mistakes.
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DanielHovdahl In reply to ShirubaaNeko [2009-04-11 17:23:21 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome! It was a pleasure to view this piece and "analyzing" it
Yes, I can see you put a lot of work in that! And the jacket is perfect from what I can see, you certainly i see it's leather! So great job on that indeed.
You could make it bigger, but you don't really need to loose the watermark if your concerned about your image, as if it's bigger, at least we can see more! So a win-win situation in my book.
Yes, I struggle with that too, what I think though, you really have to start with a pretty mid range hard pencil, and start to make a "base" for the shadows, and use a Blending stump to smudge it out and get it rather smooth, then just build it up with softer, and softer pencils and smooth out each "layer". This does take time though, and I haven't really gotten to try this technique, as I don't draw too much traditionally, but that's what my logic tells me should work the best.
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ShirubaaNeko In reply to hedspace77 [2009-04-11 04:18:29 +0000 UTC]
wow, okay, 10 past 6 am, but before I am going to bed:
Thank you SO much for that critique
I am not even able to find the right words to say, how happy this makes me. On so many points of this drawing, I was barely able to stop me from rushing, telling me over and over again "Make it slow, but make it right" You were great help for me, remembering me on that, really.
I see the problem about the shadow in front, yes. Actually in the ref the shadows were very sharp. I guess they had heavy lightening on Myv to get it that way and I was totally unsure, how to draw this. Especially while the ground was very stony. Maybe, when sending you the ref, you'll be able to help me out, how to draw something like that next time?
Aww, I really don't want to bother you with that ^,^"
And thanks so very much again for critique and I always appreciate your helpful advice a lot. Thank you
*skipping the speech for hugging you down instead*
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ddragon292 In reply to hedspace77 [2009-04-11 02:43:04 +0000 UTC]
wonderful critique. not only was it encouraging to read from an outsider's perspective, but it was thorough enough to give a good deal of advice that im sure will be valued. ^^
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ddragon292 In reply to hedspace77 [2009-04-11 21:20:48 +0000 UTC]
haha your most very welcome ^^
and you forget, the batty art teacher regularly forgets to appreciate what the artist does well, you do that while giving insightful advice. great job ^^
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Rus-Lev [2014-06-25 14:45:52 +0000 UTC]
really great! nice shading, great light use!
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keithmore2000 [2014-05-26 18:10:40 +0000 UTC]
Good work. Keep it up.
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PassiBlu [2014-04-19 22:11:16 +0000 UTC]
Wooow, nice work, very talented!Ā
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antonio-panderas [2014-02-08 19:16:56 +0000 UTC]
nicely done, awesome job with all of that reflected light!
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S3V4STR4 [2014-01-13 14:11:04 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful work.Ā You're very talented
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sugarmints [2013-12-31 00:12:58 +0000 UTC]
Whoa, this is awesome! Love the detail and shine on his jacket, you did a really good job!
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Lizabeth3696 [2013-12-27 01:51:44 +0000 UTC]
The amount of detail is amazeing!
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MorfiouzArt [2013-12-09 15:13:17 +0000 UTC]
Great job. The emotions and experiences of the subject comes through to the viewer. Keep it up.Ā
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colorcaust [2013-08-23 09:51:53 +0000 UTC]
awesome sketch.. nothing else to say ^^
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EzhikLinn [2013-08-23 08:08:42 +0000 UTC]
Nice work! Like the shadings and lights on this one
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Erazona [2013-08-21 05:04:13 +0000 UTC]
Nice work!
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3-LeafClover [2013-08-11 02:26:08 +0000 UTC]
This looks like a photograph. I am in awe.
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ShiroDaiyamondo [2013-08-06 02:03:24 +0000 UTC]
wow this is amazing
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Lamassu93 [2013-07-22 02:05:00 +0000 UTC]
Dynamic composition, excellent line work.
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eiralleena [2013-07-22 01:05:33 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful! The amount of detail that you put into this is phenomenal. The motorcycle and leather jacket are extremely well done (as is everything else).
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BarbieKyoo [2013-07-14 01:00:52 +0000 UTC]
nice ride.
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thedebatablepretty [2013-06-30 21:38:45 +0000 UTC]
This is sooo well done. The contrast is excellent! The leg on the right is a little hard to differentiate, but that's probably just lighting.
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Bicnarok [2013-06-20 14:31:08 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic, especially the bright lighting effect.
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TogetherToday [2013-02-13 07:09:07 +0000 UTC]
Wow, love the detail in this drawing! Leather is a huge pain in the but to do, I know that! I applaud you for making it look so good!
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YukinaLi13 [2013-02-05 23:15:13 +0000 UTC]
Amazing!! You draw wonderfully!! *-*
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