spelonberry [2013-08-18 04:08:37 +0000 UTC]
The lines are very beautiful. Whereas I would've put her head flung back, I think the closer inward angle is more expressive of the title. I can see the "flowers" as something between flowers and light. I especially like how the pieces drift away. They remind me of maps of the world, further signifying the idea that when your world is falling apart it is a passion that hangs on until the end. Personally I don't see this as a picture with stark areas of contrast, solely light in many different colours. If you were to colour it, red is a good color to symbolize life and sustenance.
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Shmeau In reply to spelonberry [2013-08-19 02:10:54 +0000 UTC]
I suck with colour, so I probably won't ever get around to it. That being said, feel free to try it for yourself. Also, I see where you're coming from with the angle of the head, and I agree, it would match the tittle better. But the type of passion I was going for is more to the relaxing side. (that's the best I can word it, sorry >.<) And as for the crumbling, that's totally not what I was going for (in fact, I don't think I was going for anything haha), but I really like how you interpreted it! Because that's actually kinda how I feel when I'm passionate about something, like nothing else matters in that moment, nothing in the world. Thanks so much for your input, I appreciate it
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