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Published: 2016-01-11 09:31:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 420; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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This is my part in AT with
The character Chris Chameleon is authored it, Do not use without permission.
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Hey!
I was drawn immediately to critique this because I saw you make the same mistake that I used to make, every time.
HAIR IS NOT JUST BLACK AND WHITE.
There's always some really really subtle colour. Black hair has usually blue or brown undertones, while light hair gets affected by whatever colour the surroundings are.
Your initial sketch seems like it was pretty good. I'd love to see just the black and white version, actually. What you did with the colour was you used extremely saturated colour, and there isn't any evidence of colour relationships. I'd suggest try putting a black layer on top and setting it to saturation, then just playing with the opacity to see how the saturation affects the overall look.
My attention gets drawn to the moon too much, maybe make it bigger and put it behind the bigger head. And there shouldn't be shading on the moon unless it's really close and isn't reflecting light.
That being said, nice texture on the rock and plants. I can tell you put effort into those. In the future though, don't detail them too much because 1. it takes up your precious time and 2. the focus is on the character, not the background details.
Although the saliva effect is one of my favourite parts of this picture e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Other than that, I can tell that you had a really good idea and you seem to be in a developing stage in how you present that idea. I like that you have a good grip on perspective on the character, and the motion of the small version in front.
I know I listed things that you could improve on like "pewpewpew" but please know that I WANNA HELP YOU e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="37" height="25" alt="
and I'm gonna go ahead and watch you so I can see you improve, because I really think you can do it easily with the kind of understanding that you already have.
PS you're way better at character sketching than I was when I was at that stage e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="15" height="15" alt="
-Amy
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I'm really pleased with his critical Amy.
I confess that I do not own any painting technique, and every comment that helps me to follow a righteous way, are welcome.
I will try to have more attention on those points you mentioned and try to practice more painting techniques.
Really I appreciate the sincere and professional critique. And thanks for your help!
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Yay!
I was kind of worried it was too harsh, but I'm so glad you took it well!
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De fato ficou muito bom, gostei demais da pintura que aborda desde as dobras da roupa até os músculos! Continue assim
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As vezes acho que extrapolo na pintura (mais por não saber o que estou fazendo). Mas fico feliz em saber que esse exagero agrada as pessoas! Valeu meu amigo!
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Detalhismo! O problema é você harmonizar tudo isso, e você o faz bem
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Muito obrigado amigo!
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. acordo
. arrumo a cama
. ligo o notebook
. conecto na internet
. abro o dA
. vejo essa lindeza
. vitóriaestádesmaiada.png
. gritando
. gritando mais ainda
. parava
MEU DEUS DO CÉU
EU NUNCA VI ALGO TÃO FODA IGUAL ISSO,CARA.
EUTOGRITANDOAQUI
CARA
CARA
CARA.
FICOU
MUITO
FODA *U*''
EU TO ME SENTINDO UM LIXO POR NÃO TER POSTADO MINHA PARTE ATÉ AGORA ;-;
MAS CARA
FICOU MUITO FODA
EU ADOREI!!! *U*''
EU VOU TIPO
POSTAR MINHA PARTE HOJE
ME DESCULPA PELA DEMORA ;W;
MAS
CONTINUE ASSIM QUE TU VAI LONGE ÒuÓ
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Acho que você gostou, tô certo? XD
Não se sinta má por não ter postado, eu que acabei me enrolando e não terminei antes (havia ficado somente alguns detalhes da imagem principal e o fundo para fazer).
Mas fora isso, foi um prazer poder ter feito está arte e ver que você gostou!
Muito obrigado por ter aceito a fazer essa AT!
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