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Published: 2013-06-25 15:06:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 1019; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 9
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I know it lacks depth lol Enjoy..Related content
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This would've be one of my favs if the depth wasn't so off.. The stuff "in front" of the render is more blurry than the stuff behind the render.. Meh :c and the line pointing towards her chest seems a bit weird. I think you wanted it to move "behind" her body, but instead it seems to poke her boobs. Next time use a hard brush with 100% oppacity to "cut" the line off so it moves behind the render. Now it seems to be fading out or something.. Or was that your intention? It is distracting me, at least. I think it lacks finishing touches, which makes me sad, cause the piece itself is totally amazing. I would love if you would upload a V2 with a blurry background, sharper in the front, but ofc, not sharper as the render itself. And then I'll finally be able to hit the "fav" button.
Oh and sorry for the huuuge textwall. And please don't get mad at me or anything, I come here with good intentions!
-Begs for forgiveness, I must sound like an annoying know-it-all-
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You are the first person who gave my Deviations this kind of critique and thank you very much for this. I know that this piece lacks something else, but I coouldn't add anything (was out of ideas). And about that line: Topaz Clean Made it like that lol, so that's why it seems bit weird, yea i should erase it..
Thanks for advice, I'll make another Version at my free time and if I won't be too lazy to start changing some things there haha
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Oh, I'm glad you don't mind :3
About that line pointing towards her boobs. I do like the other lines, they create some depth and a bit of a surrealistic feeling, and it would be a waste to erase one of them.
Can't you sharpen the line and then cut it off with a 100% oppacity 2px hard brush eraser? Atleast so it won't be fading out anymore? Oh well, I will be waiting for a V2
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No I mean to erase that part which pokes her boobs lol..
Thanks again, I'll make V2 ASAP
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