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Shorai-san β Schizophrenia XII
Published: 2009-10-10 22:23:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 1831; Favourites: 66; Downloads: 0
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#12 of the series.Technically, I have enough for my AP concentration, but I might need to redo some. And I'm not even sure if I should include this in the series or not. I'm not really crazy over it (mainly because I hate the feet and the arms).
If you have any opinions/criticism on the series, please share. :]
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Hi, I have Schizophrenia and saw this photo on tumblr today. I wanted to let know that no picture has ever affected me more. This a beautiful piece which I feel can relateΒ incredibly to. After trying DBT for over a year this really hits me hard. Well done, beautiful.Β
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I like your work, you really know how to do a sad/empty mood or ambientation. But I think you could make better character drawings. For me, they look just too much 2D and, unless that was the intention, it doesn't look like it is inside the picture.
But great work
And sorry for any possible english mistake :/
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I'm sorry, I'm not into arts, but I think It's very beatiful and I got some strong emotions looking at it.[link]
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The arms are a bit rough, a little stick like (elbow or shaping?), but I don't see what was wrong with the feet?? I think the feet are great. And really I didn't see anything wrong till you said anything LOL.
It's a great series and the concept outshines anything that could be wrong. Plus you have awsome knowledge on color and lighting!
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Woot #12. 
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Haha, if I started it when school started, I'd be panicking right now.
Thanks! :]
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Man, I really wish I had your skill in digital painting. This just looks amazing!
Overall, I love the series (I wish I had thought of it for portfolio!). Each piece uses color and ideas so well.
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This one is more compelling visually. The point of view is unconventional and the texture use is wonderfully subtle.
I think that her wrists start a little too far up the arms. That might be your problem with the them, but I'm prone to elongate things so my eye is biased. Her feet aren't bad at all. If you thin out the lower half of the calves the legs will be more elegant, but I personally prefer them as they are; very honest.
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Thanks!
And I do believe you're right about the wrists. Thanks for pointing that out. :]
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Personally I think you're done an incredible job on the series, very striking and original artworks. But it's your call whether you want to remove some pieces
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Thanks!
There are some I may pull, since I feel like I've repeated the same concept in them.
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